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Around 300 people were evacuated from Cornerhouse Cinema located on Oxford Street, Manchester, on Saturday September 14th after someone threatened to blow up the building.
The alert was caused when a person called to police and said that a bomb had been hidden in Cornerhouse Cinema and was due to go off in an hour.
Investigators and police bomb dogs searched the building finding a suspicious package in a waste bin. Bomb disposal experts were called in immediately and they confirmed that it was not a bomb. The experts would not comment on what type of package was found.
The building normal operation reasumed after the evacuation ended.
This incident was the second security scare in Manchester during last week. "On Wednesday was second anniversary of the September 11 terrorist attacks", said police detective Robert Thomson. "We are hoped that was the last incident"

troche malo napisalam na ten temat, moze ma ktos jakis temat co mozna tu jeszcze dodac...

ON Saturday September 14tH ABOUT 300 people were evacuated from Cornerhouse Cinema located on Oxford Street, Manchester,
after someone threatened to blow up the building.

The alert was TURNED ON when AN ANONYMOUS person called police and said that a bomb had been hidden in THE Cornerhouse Cinema and IT IS GOING TO EXPLODE(was due to go off) in an hour.

Investigators and THEIR POLICE DOGS (TO ZLE BRZMI????police bomb dogs???) searched the building AND FOUND a suspicious package in a waste bin. (???Bomb disposal???) experts were called immediately and they DECLARED that it was not a bomb. The experts DID NOT comment what type of package was found.
(NIE ZBYT ZROZUMIALE ZDANIE?????The building normal operation reasumed after the evacuation ended?????).
This incident was the (??second security scare??) in Manchester during last week.
"THE second anniversary OF terrorist attack ON 11TH OF September WAS ON WEDNESDAY", said Robert Thomson- police detective. "We are HOPING THAT IT WAS the last incident"


wymaga to jeszcze poprawek tak gdzie masz duzo pytajnikow tam konieczni trzeba wprowadzic zmiane.. napisz sobie to jeszcze raz. strasznie to zamotane

Around 300 people were evacuated from THE Cornerhouse Cinema located on Oxford Street, Manchester, on Saturday 'September 14th' (the 14th of September) after someone threatened to blow up the building.
The alert was caused when a person called 'to' THE police and said that a bomb had been hidden in THE Cornerhouse Cinema and was due to go off in an hour.
Bomb disposal experts were called in immediately 'and they' (mozna tez WHO) confirmed that it was not a bomb.
The building normal operation reasumed after the evacuation ended.
This incident was the second security scare in Manchester during THE last week. "On Wednesday was THE second anniversary of the September 11 terrorist attacks", said police detective Robert Thomson. "We are 'hoped' HOPING that THIS was the last incident"

>>The alert was 'TURNED ON' (to nie tak- to nie jest zrozumiale) ...
>Investigators and 'THEIR POLICE DOGS' (nie, investigators to jedna jednostka, a police with dogs to druga jednostka)
>"The second anniversary OF terrorist attack on the 11th of Sept was
>on Wed", said Robert Thomson- police detective. - to zdanie cos nie tak...t

dzieki za sprawdzenie:)postaram sie cos z tym zrobic tylko nie wiem czy zdaze...pozdrawiam