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Temat: The advantages and disadvantages of passing the exams.

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Imagine yourself, sitting in the big hall with rows of desks. You bite your pencil and wait for your test which may have influence on future.
Nowadays, all of us is obligated to pass a lot of exams in his life- starting from primary school and…..actually ending never. But is this properly to check our level of knowledge in this way?
First of all, passing examinations is very stressful. Even if you are well-prepared you might be anxious and disorientated. Stress arouse stomach problems which can cross out your plans for future.
Secondly, tests do not reflect real knowledge level. Unfortunately questions can be from different material or be wrong formulated. You can do mistakes independently from you, and because of it have less marks.
Thirdly, exams are unfair. You were studied long time but someone did not and you have the same total mark. Why? Because he copied all answers!
On the other hand, exams encourage people to learning. If you study more you pass better. Consequently you have better job or go to elite school.
Furthermore, examination is the fastest way to check your knowledge. Unfortunately for people who prepare the test, not for examiner.
What is more, exam is good way to check yourself. You can improve your subject, or be serious that only revision is need.
To sum up, there is lot of advantages and disadvantages of passing the examinations. In my mind good-points outweighs drawbacks. The best way to have exams after you is study hard and be sure of your knowledge.

You bite your pencil and wait for your test which may have AN influence on YOUR future.
Nowadays, all of 'us is' (ale 'us' to znaczy, ze jest wiecej jak jedna osoba, a 'is' odnosi sie do l.poj) obligated to pass a lot of exams in 'his' (uzyj OUR life- starting from primary school and.....actually ending never.
But is this 'properly' (nie, nie to slowo - jabym napisala...the best method) to check our level of knowledge in this way?
First of all, 'passing' (nie, nie, 'passing' jest latwo, tylko 'taking an examination' jest trudno) examinations is very stressful.
Stress 'arouse' (nie, tu lepiej starts) stomach problems which can cross out your plans for THE future.
Secondly, ANY tests do not reflect THE real knowledge level. Unfortunately
questions can be from different material or be 'wrong' (nie, chciles napisac 'wrongly' ale lepiej uzyj 'incorrectly' formulated. You can 'do' MAKE mistakes 'independently from you' (cos tu nie tak), and because of 'it' THIS have less marks.
You 'were' HAVE studied FOR A long time but someone did not and you have the same total mark. Why? Because he copied all THE answers!
On the other hand, exams encourage people to 'learning' LEARN.
...If you study more you pass better.... (jabym to inaczej...The more you stdy, the better your marks will be)
Consequently you have A better job or go to AN elite school.
Unfortunately THIS IS for people who prepare the test, not for THE examiner.
What is more, exam is A good way to check yourself. You can improve your
subject, or be 'serious that only revision is needED' (cos nie tak - czy masz na mysli...know that only serious revision is needed).
To sum up, there is A lot of advantages and disadvantages of 'passing' (nie, nie passing- ale using examinations as a test of knowkledge)the examinations. In my mind THE good-points outweigH THE drawbacks. The best way to have exams 'after' BEHIND you is TO study hard and be sure of your knowledge.
(mozesz dodac - ...and try to overcome stress)

zamiast the advantages and disadvantages.... napisz pros and cons of passing......
AN influence on YOUR future
ARE obligated
OUR lives
revision in NeedED Reszta jest niby dobrze ale jakoś Polsko to brzmi...

u have been studying for a long time jak juz....

A co zrobic zeby tak mniej "z polska"?

wiesz to jest dobrze ogólnie tylko wydaje sie tak jakbys to wszystko tłumaczyła dosłownie z Polskiego na Angielski...trzeba więcej idiomów użyc i będzie ciekawiej brzmiało :)

"less marks" could be changed for "worse marks"
You don't get less marks if you take an exam. Their quality is only a bit poorer :D The number of marks is the same as a good student's one. :)

Myśle ze nie moge przesadzac, bo na moim etapie nauki bylo by to co najmniej podejrzane.... ;)

hahahaha :) a jak tak to w porządku wszystko jest nic nie zmieniaj :D

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