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LIFE AFTER DEATH.



Death has always tormented the human being. Throughout their lives, people have been struggled with the question of what happens after death. Nobody likes the idea that we are going to die. It’s one of those things that subconsciously pop into our head whenever we get comfortable, and it strikes us that it will all come to an end, usually without our prior notification. Many people find it hard and they cannot accept the fact that their lives could ever end.
Man is tempted to believe in life after death. That is why the reincarnation theories are popular in many religions. It seems that people are comfortable with the idea of another chance to return to earth and make some things right. However, some people are reborn as healthy, some as constant losers and others as rich and famous. These differences are a result of previous lives, good or bad, bears their fruits in the present.
As far as Christians are concerned, they are exceptional beings, on whom the God has endowed the grace of resurrection. Death to Christian involves the refusal of the existence of a hell as a place of punishment. However, not in the case of suicides who are condemned to the eternal suffer for what they have done. The Bible contradicts itself. Or maybe people contradict their beliefs to hope for beautiful and careless life after death.



Największy problem mam z użyciem /the/ nie wiem czy ma być the life after the death czy the man ... juz mi sie pomieszało :) Dziękuje za jakąkolwiek pomoc.
Throughout their lives, people have been 'struggled' STRUGGLING with the question of what happens (to them) after death.
Nobody likes the idea that we are ALL going to die.
It's one of those things that subconsciously 'pop' lepij ENTER our head) into our head whenever we get 'comfortable' (tzn przez televizorem, czy gdzie? co masz a mysli 'comfortable'?), and it strikes us that it will all come
to an end, usually without our prior notification.
It seems that people are comfortable with the idea of another chance to return to earth and 'make' PUT some things 'right' (chociaz tez lepiej wytlumaczyc co wg ciebie jest 'right', duzo ludzi wierzy, ze to co teraz robia jest 'right')
These differences are aS A result of previous lives, good or bad, 'bears' BEARING their fruits in the present.
As far as Christians are concerned, 'they are' (ale kto tak mowi?) exceptional beings, on whom 'the' (wg mnie niepotr, mozna tez powiedziec THEIR) God has endowed the grace of resurrection. Death to A Christian involves the refusal of the existence of a hell as a place of punishment.
However, (this does not apply in cases) not in the case of 'suicides who are condemned' (nie, ...people who commit suicide who are condemned to eternal...) to 'the' (niepotr) eternal sufferING for what they have done. The Bible (very often) contradicts itself. Or maybe people 'contradict their beliefs' (moze lepiej ..only see/read/believe in the parts of the Bible that most suit them) IN 'to' THE hope 'for' OF A beautiful and careless life after death.
Dziękuje bardzo za pomoc :)
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LIFE AFTER DEATH.



Throughout their lives, people have been struggling with the question of what happens after death. Nobody likes the idea that we are all going to die. It’s one of those things that subconsciously pop into our head whenever we get comfortable, and it strikes us that it will all come to an end, usually without our prior notification. Many people find it hard and they cannot accept the fact that their lives could ever end.
Man is tempted to believe in life after death. That is why the reincarnation theories are popular in many religions. It seems that people are comfortable with the idea of another chance to return to earth and make some things right. However, some people are reborn as healthy, some as constant losers and others as rich and famous. These differences are as a result of previous lives, good or bad, bearing their fruits in the present.
As far as Christians are concerned, they are exceptional beings, on whom God has endowed the grace of resurrection. Death to a Christian involves the refusal of the existence of a hell as a place of punishment. However, this does not apply in cases of people who commit suicide and are condemned to eternal suffering for what they have done. The Bible very often contradicts itself. Or maybe people only believe in the parts of the Bible that most suit them, in the hope of a beautiful and careless life after death.

Mam nadzieje że teraz jest juz OK - jakiekolwiek nowe sugestie można śmiało zgłaszać :D
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>refusal of the existence of 'a' (mysle, ze niepotr) hell as a place of (eternal) punishment.

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