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What are advantages and disadvantages of living in the united Europe?

As the device of the European Union said ' United is in diversity '. The European Union was made to united all European countries and accelerate their development. Although, is living in united Europe giving only advantages?

To begin with, a stabilization of country is priceless. For me, it is the most valuable thing. Thanks to European Union, in case of attack from other county, we can expect help from other members of this big organization. Our country in last centuries was several times constrained by neighbouring countries.

Secondly, we have opportunity to move all over united Europe without any passports, visas etc. huge facilitate for people who travel frequently. It is also big adventage if you look at people who want to work abroad.

On the contrary, the disadvantage of living in the United Europe is that our government's hands are tied, because of laws, treatises and other rules of European Union. There is also another problem which concern a ratifications of some treatises.

However, rich countries can support poor and after this poor nations become richer, then they can help the newest one. The same situation we had in Poland. Rich countries help us at the moment. In future we will help new nations in European Union.

Another disadvantage is a fact of unemployement in countries where foreigners want to work. Citizens don't have work places, because this places are taken by people from other countries.

To sum up, the arguments for shows that it is very good to live in united Europe, but it is not perfect what was shown by disadvantages. In our country there were a lot of oppositions before we join European Union. In my opinion it was the best thing we could do and it's great to be a part of united Europe.
>As the device of the European Union said ' United is in diversity '.

jaka device??

>The European Union was made to united all European countries and
>accelerate their development.

...to unite (nie united) i może formed zamiast made?

Although, is living in united Europe
>giving only advantages?

However, (nie although) does living in the united Europe have only advantages?

...of a country
the European Union
in case of an attack by another country

we have an opportunity...the united Europe
without passports or visas which facilitates travel for people who do it frequently.

It is also a big advantage if you consider people who want to work abroad.

On the other hand (zamiast on the contrary)
....rules of the European Union.
...which concerns ratifications...

>However, rich countries can support poor and after this poor nations
>become richer, then they can help the newest one.
....support the poor ones, and once these poor nations.....the newest members of the European Union.

in the European Union

>Another disadvantage is a fact of unemployement in countries where
>foreigners want to work.
....is unemployment in countries...

To sum up, the arguments for shows that it is very good to live in
>united Europe, but it is not perfect what was shown by disadvantages.

To sum up, living in the united Europe has both advantages and disadvantages.

In our country, there was a strong opposition to joining the European Union.
In my opinion, however, it was the best thing we could have done.....of the united Europe.
>To begin with, a stabilization of country is priceless. For me, it is
>the most valuable thing.

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