proszę o sprawdzenie

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I’m looking for an interesting Job for holidays. I speak German well, and English reasonable. I like to work with people. I’m patient, try to always do my best. It’s a chance for me to practice my language skills and meet interesting people, that’s way will it be not “just a job” for me but a new experience. I think it’s an interesting way to spend a part of my holidays.

Like I’ve already wrote, I like to work with people, I’m conscientious and hard-working. I think I would enjoy this job. I know that I don’t have many experiences, but I’m sure i can handle it. I hope to get more information’s about your requirements and about this job.
I always try to do my best (kolejnosc)
That's why it will be (kolejnosc)
I've have already WRITTEN (trzecia forma present perfect!)
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