Witam ;)
Napisałam krótkie opowiadanie i byłambym wdzięczna gdyby ktos mógł je sprawdzić ;) Dodam, że jest to moje pierwsze tego typu opowiadanie i wydaje mi sie że nie wyszło mi najlepiej ... ;( w polecenie było napisane, że ma być z nutką romantyzmu, tyle że ja jestem kiepsa w wymyslaniu takich zadań ... Z góry dziękuje ;*
Last summer I decided to spend my holidays in USA. I thought it was a good idea but as soon as I get there I realized it wasn’t a best choice.
I lend on airport in Seattle. From this moment everything started to go wrong. At first my luggage lost. I waited two hours on airport because no one couldn’t found it. I was so nervous, tired and starving. Finally I get my luggage back I catch a taxi and go to my hotel. It was 9 p.m. and all I wanted was rest. When I was laying in my bed someone knocked my door.
‘ There is a card, Do not disturb’ – I said
But someone didn’t yield. The moment the door opened I saw a very handsome man.
‘ Excuse me, but you are in my room’
I was thinking what he’s talking about. I didn’t wanted to argue so I grab my things and leave the room. The man said that he would me honored if such a beautiful lady like me could stay in. I blush and walk away. I rent other room in this hotel. Next day I decided go to mol. But I didn’t get there because I broke my leg falling out of (nie jestem tego pewna) the stairs in hotel. Someone call 911. I was waiting for a doctor in hospital. I really surprised when I saw this man from hotel.
- ‘Good morning I’m doctor Shepherd’
- ‘Oh it’s you, how’s the room ?’
- ‘It’s fine, but I would be better if you could stay in’
- ‘Let’s make a deal, If you fix my leg I’ll go with you for a dinner’
As it turned out it weren’t so bad holiday.
Last summer I decided to spend my holidays in USA. I thought it was a good idea but as soon as I get there I realized it wasn’t a best choice.
I lend on airport in Seattle. From this moment everything started to go wrong. At first my luggage lost. I waited two hours on airport because no one couldn’t found it. I was so nervous, tired and starving. Finally I get my luggage back I catch a taxi and go to my hotel. It was 9 p.m. and all I wanted was rest. When I was laying in my bed someone knocked my door.
‘ There is a card, Do not disturb’ – I said
But someone didn’t yield. The moment the door opened I saw a very handsome man.
‘ Excuse me, but you are in my room’
I was thinking what he’s talking about. I didn’t wanted to argue so I grab my things and leave the room. The man said that he would me honored if such a beautiful lady like me could stay in. I blush and walk away. I rent other room in this hotel. Next day I decided go to mol. But I didn’t get there because I broke my leg falling out of (nie jestem tego pewna) the stairs in hotel. Someone call 911. I was waiting for a doctor in hospital. I really surprised when I saw this man from hotel.
- ‘Good morning I’m doctor Shepherd’
- ‘Oh it’s you, how’s the room ?’
- ‘It’s fine, but I would be better if you could stay in’
- ‘Let’s make a deal, If you fix my leg I’ll go with you for a dinner’
As it turned out it weren’t so bad holiday.