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Many people using the internet to know a New person, but some of them think, that it is a bad idea. It has many advantages and disadvantages.

There are several arguments that using the internet it is a good idea to know a new people. The most important advantage of it, it is fact that you can know a lot of interesting people. What is more it is easy to find people, who has similar interests, hobbies like you, they could tell you something what you did not know. Many people arque that you can share you intimate details because you stay anonyms, they will never see your face in real.

The main disadvantage of making friends per Internet is that there is not face-to-face contact, then somebody can tell you many lies and you do not know if it is true or not. Other disadvantage is fact that many people may lie you about themselves. She can say that she is a beautiful young women but in fact “she”” is a old man. The last reason, why it has drawbacks is that “virtual” friends can rab you. He or she attain you trust and exploit it to steal your money from credit card.

To sum up, using the internet to know people has many positive as and negative sides. People just should be careful and use it with the “head”.
Many people ARE using the internet to GET TO know a 'New' (mala litera) person, but some of 'them' (do kogo 'them' sie odnosi?) think, that it is a bad idea. 'It' (do czego to 'it' sie odnosi) has many advantages and
disadvantages.

There are several arguments that using the internet it is a good idea
to GET TO know 'a' (przed l. mnoga, (people) nie dajemy 'a') new people. The most important advantage of it, 'it' (po co to 'it' tutaj?) is THE fact that you can know a lot of interesting people. What is more it is easy
to find people, who 'has' (people to l. mnoga - people HAVE, 'has' odnosi sie do 3os.l.poj) similar interests, hobbies like you, they could tell you something what you did not know. Many people arque that you can share youR intimate details because you stay 'anonyms' (zle slowo) (ta czesc zdanie niema sensu - popraw), they will never see your face in 'real' (ale real co? real LIFE).
The main disadvantage of making friends 'per' THROUGH THE Internet is that there is not A face-to-face contact, then somebody can tell you many lies and you do not know if it is true or not. Other disadvantage is THE fact that many
people may lie TO you about themselves. (ale przeciez to pierwsze zdania mowi to samo - popraw) 'She' (a niby dlaczego od razu 'she'?) can say that she is a
beautiful young 'women' (niestety tego nie moze powiedziec, bo 'women' to l. mnoga, nie znam kobiet ktore sa l. mnoga) but in fact “she"" is aN old man. The last reason, why it has drawbacks is that “virtual" friends can 'rab' (ortog) you. He or she CAN attain you trust and exploit it to steal your money
from FOR EXAMPLE A credit card.
To sum up, using the internet to know people has many positive as (co to slowo tutaj trobi?) and negative sides. People 'just should' (zla kol slow - should just) be careful and use 'it' (napisz the Internet) 'with' USING theIR “head".

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