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Proszę o sprawdzenie wypowiedzi ;) Będę wdzięczna za choćby pojedyncze zdania.

I could never be a web designer, because it is a job, which require to be creative and clever. I don't have any artistic capacity. In addition, web designer is a job with a computer and it could cause illness of eyes. I'd prefer to have regular time of work, but (chciałam powiedzieć "a") web designer sometimes overtime.
I could be a doctor or a social worker, because I like being with people. I think,that helping peple with their healthy could give me satisfaction. It is alsowell-paid job. Social worker must be good listener.I like to talk with people and give them advices, so I can work with people needed help.
I could never be a web designer, because it is a job, BEZ PRZECINKA which require
I could never be a web designer, because it is a job, which requireS YOU to be creative and clever. sprawdz zasady 'przecinkowania'
Why the comma after "job"?
Dlatego dodalem uwage re. przecinkow.
Dziękuję bardzo. Zawsze można tu liczyć na pomoc:)
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