Opis wydarzenia - proszę o sprawdzenie :)
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Opis wydarzenia związanego ze złodziejem.
It was beautiful Saturday evening, nearly 8 pm. Charlie was walking to home after football match. When he turned into Jakies Street, he saw a robber who has stolen purse young woman. “Robber! Please stop him! He stolen my purse” was screaming woman.
“That’s no good. What I need suppose to do?” Charlie asked himself. He was staying behind wall when robber ran into him. Charlie knocked him and pressed down to ground. Robber was trying to get up and run away, but he can’t go that. “Don’t move young man. I will call police” said Charlie.
Woman who was victim in this robbery recovered purse safely. The police arrived. Policeman thanked Charlie for help and took robber into police office. Charlie was very proud of his success operation and a good civil posture.
Proszę o sprawdzenie tekstu i poprawności gramatycznej. Chętnie rozpatrzę wszystkie Wasze sugestie dotyczące zmian w treści ;)
Prosze sie nauczyc uzywac 'the' tam gdzie to ma byc, nie mam zadnej przyjemnosci poprawiac cos, gdzie ewidentnie nie nauczyles sie podstawowych rzeczy.
It was A beautiful Saturday evening, nearly 8 pm. Charlie was walking 'to' (niepotr, nie mowimy I am walking to home..tylko I am walking home)
home after A football match. When he turned into Jakies Street, he saw a
robber who has stolen THE purse OF A young woman. “Robber! Please stop
him! He HAS stolen my purse" 'was screaming woman' (nie, tutaj nie rozrozniasz czesci zdania 'screaming' ma byc czasownikiem ..THE WOMAN WAS SCREAMING.
What AM I 'need' (niepotr) suppose to do?" Charlie asked himself. He 'was staying' (tutaj HIDING behind A wall when THE robber ran into him. Charlie
knocked him OUT and pressed HIM down to THE ground. THE robber was trying to get up and run away, but he 'can't' COULDN'T 'go' DO that.
I will call THE police" said Charlie.
THEW woman who was THE victim 'in' OF this robbery recovered HER purse safely. THE policeman thanked Charlie for HIS help and took THE robber into THE police 'office' STATION. Charlie was very proud of his successFUL operation
and OF a good civil 'posture' (nie za bardzo to slowo- moze DUTY?).
Wielkie dzięki za sprawdzenie :)
Co do błędów typu THE, to często zapominam o tym, a dzisiaj to po prostu nie miałem za wiele czasu na napisanie tego opisu.