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Zamierzasz zapisac sie na wakacyjny kurs jezyka angielskiego w Szkocji. napisz list do szkoly jezykowej:
1 zapytaj o kursy jezyka nagielskiego jakie szkola oferuje
2 opisz swoj poziom przygotowania jezyka
3 wyjasnij kiedy bedziesz w szkocji i jak dlugo
4 popros o przeslanie bruszury informacyjnej




Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing enquire about courses in English which offers your school. How many courses are you offer? How much does is cost on one month?

My engilsh is at the level of extend. I have been learn this language for 5 years. I have got certificate FCE.
I would like start this course 6 th June 2010 and I will be in Scotland for 1 year.

I heard about your school lots of positive opinions so my dream is learning in this istitution.
I would be very grateful if you could send me brochure with accurate information.

Yours faithfully,
XYZ



prosze o naniesienie poprawek i ewentualne dodanie brakujacych tresci,
z gory serdecznie dziekuje:)

I am writing TO enquire about THE courses in English which 'offers your
school' (zla kol slow - pomysl kto to oferuje i co i napisz w tej kolejnosci). How many courses 'are' DO you offer? How much does is cost 'on' (to nie tylko jest kalka z polskiego ale jeszcze i kolokw - nie zawsze 'na' zmieniamy na ang. odpowiednik 'on',- pomysl o tym i napisz poprawnie) one month?
My 'engilsh' (duza litera i ortog) is at the level of 'extend' (nie rozumiem co tu masz na mysli). I have been 'learn' (tutaj czas contin) this language
for 5 years. I have got 'certificate FCE' (zla kol slow, najpierw tytul cert a wtedy co to jest).
I would like TO start this course (ale tutaj cos brakuje) 6th June 2010 and I will be in Scotland for 1 year.

I heard (tutaj piszemy co slyszales a pozniej ze o szkole) 'about your school lots of positive opinions' so my dream is TO 'learning' LEARN in this 'istitution' (ortog).
I would be very grateful if you could send me brochure with 'accurate' (lepiej daj AN up-to-date) information.