Prosze o sprawdzenie (opowiadanie)

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Opowiadanie ma sie kończyć słowami "After ten years of effort, he finally gotwhat he had always." Prosze o sprawdzenie i napisanie co jest źle z góry dziękuje.

Bright morning sunlight shone through his bedroom window when he woke. He lay there lazily for a few minutes, then jumped out of bed and stepped under the hot water of the shower. The smell of coffee drifted through from the kitchen.
Danny prepared to first day in his new job, but it wasn’t tailor-made job because he had wanted been He Saw soccer player. Every day after job, even when he was exhausted, he went to playing field to training soccer. at one time when she was arriving to Home she rescued child who might dead because unnoticed oncoming car. Child was very scared. The parent’s child thank Danny for rescued their child. On place accident quickly came reporters. One of reporter to interview with Danny. Danny said that she did what she had to . “What your dream work is?” asked journalist “I want be soccer player” replied Danny. Child’s father was coach team of the football and he proposed Danny to play in his team. Danny was very excited and he consent on his proposition. Danny was happy. He was brilliant player. Then Danny got next proposition from the best football team.
After ten years of effort, he finally got what he had always wanted, he stilled famous soccer player.

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