Drobna praca {Sprawdzenie}

Witam Mam napisać opowiadanie o przygodach Sali i użyć emphase? (może ktos mi wytłumaczyc co to jest i poprawic w tekście) oraz extreme adjectives ( to użyłem)
Prezentuje moje wypociny (Wiem że głupie ale proszę o pomoc z góry dzieki)

I have had normal student life, but one day change everything. I was walking down a street and pass hideous school, when suddenly my phone rang. Anxious voice said You must come to gym quickly. I thought someone kid for me but I must come true my curiosity. One hour late I knew that our school team was having very important volleyball match with Longbridge . They had beaten our team earlier. Everything was clear but why they need me ? I think. Suddenly I saw Natasha with gypsum. Coach want me to took place our captain. They did not get chance to choose, they only shows me only cloakroom. One minute later I was ready to got a target, win the match. I have not playing volleyball for very long time, but I knew that everything be wonderful. All of a sudden whistle rang. We started well and took an early lead. But soon the match was tied 22-22. I felt inside voice who said This is your ball. It was Longbridge to serve, and overcame the ball. One the point board was 25-26 to us. I realize if I got point we win game. Then Anita, one of person of our them, knocked the ball high into air. I jumped and hit the winning point. This is true Hollywood store, This experience allow me to play in school team.

I have had A normal student life, but one day (change[zly czas] everything..kol slow). I was walking down a street , when suddenly my phone rang. AN Anxious voice said, "You must come to gym quickly". I thought someone WAS kid(dodaj koncowke) me but I HAD TO SATISFY my curiosity. One hour late (kiedy? za godzine..."from now?" I knew that our school team was having A very important volleyball match with Longbridge . They had beaten our team earlier (that season?, that month? that week? albo tylko "before"). Everything was clear but why DID they need me ? I think (zly czas i pare slow brakuje). Suddenly, I saw Natasha with gypsum???nie rozumiem). Coach wantED me to took (zly czas) THE place OF our captain. They did not get A chance to choose (czego?), they only shows (zly czas) me THE only cloakroom. One minute later, I was ready to got (zly czas) a target??(chyba zle slowo), win the match. I have not playing (zly czas) volleyball for A very long time, but I knew that everything WOULD be wonderful. All of a sudden the whistle rang (gwizdek nie dzwoni). We started well and took an early lead, but soon the match was tied 22-22. I felt (lepiej heard) (inside A voice...kol slow) INSIDE OF ME THAT said, "This is your ball". It was Longbridge'S TURN to serve, and overcame??? the ball. The (point..lepiej "scoreboard") board was 25-26 to (dla nas, nie do nas) us. I realizeD if I got A point we WOULD win (przedimek) game. Then Anita, A GIRL ON OUR TEAM , knocked the ball high into air. I jumped and hit the winning point. This is LIKE A true Hollywood store (orto), This experience allow (zly czas) me to play On THE school team.