Faktycznie, babola niezłego odwaliłam :) Mniej więcej tak wygląda ta "poprawiona" wersja:
- What a beautiful, sunny day- thought Luke, when he enter to Library. The place was completely empty, not calculating the librarian and the man which were leading in lively conversation. In the same moment, when the door was closing with silent creak, the man took out a gun and shot twice. Luke horrified looked at librarian, who fall on the floor.
- Why you do that? – Luke exclaimed frightened.
But the man didn’t have time to give him answer, because the door again creak and to Library got in young girl.
- Why you’re holding the gun? - girl asked the man politely, with big smile.
- You are my hostages – said man without any emotions – Please, close the door. I don’t want any more guests.
When Luke was closing the door, the man took out handcuffs.
- I was prepared for only one hostage, but I believe that you don’t have nothing against the company of this beautiful women – the man said to Luke, and chained Luke and the girl together.
- Hi – the girl sent a charming smile – What’s your name?
- Luke.
- I’m Madeleine. Nice to meet you.
- Sorry, but I don’t think that it’s a good moment to start the friendship – said Luke nervous, constantly watching the man, who already looking for something in the books.
Madeleine was starting make bizarre movements to reach her handbag, which is not very far, but her resigned companion was enormous impediment. At least, she captured handbag and open it.
- What are you doing?! – whispered Luke.
- I have a key – explained Madeline.
- Key? We don’t need the key! We need the gun! Big gun.
- It’s quite pointed. When the man come back, I will stab him on eye, and you take him the gun.
- It’s very extreme solution. And it’s completely stupid! - said irritating Luke.
- We’re in extreme situation, and we need extreme solution. If we don’t attack, he will kill us.
The man was coming back, and they excellently heard his steps on the floor…