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There is a lot of discussion on the global warming. It is hard to say how effects of the global warming will change the way we live in the future.
There is no denying that there will be some changes. In my opinion those changes will make our lives worst than now.
First of all, due to the global warming the environment is changing for example, the oceans temperature goes up. It may cause melting of glaciers. As a result, the water level will raise and some places will be flooded. Many ecosystems will be damaged and it may lead to extermination of many animals species. On the other hand, some areas will experience droughts. With increased floods and droughts we will be in dangerous. These disasters can even lead to conflicts and wars. People will fight for food, water or some place to live.
Moreover, people will have to get used to the new conditionals and environments. In some areas there will be higher temperature than in the past and in other areas will be lower. It may be difficult for people to change their habits. What is more, the new climate may be the reason of new kind of illnesses and viruses. It is also very dangerous for our health. As we know diseases, especially new diseases, are very expensive to treat. More and more money we will spent on treatments and protecting from them. Many financial problems will be caused by that. What is more, money will be needed to fight with other disasters like floods or droughts.
To sum up, global warming will definitely change the way we live in the future. Those changes will have huge influence on plants and animals life, economy and our health. But everything depends on us. There are small actions that we can all take in order to protect our world. First, we can reduce electricity, second, we may recycle rubbish and do many other things. Although it's a small change, many small changes will someday lead to a bigger change. We should take care of our planet in every way we can.
Znowu problemy z tym 'the' i 'a' - a mowilam ze trzeba to wkuc na zawsze.

There is a lot of discussion on 'the' (niepotr) global warming. It is hard to say how THE effects of 'the' (niepotr) global warming will change the way we live in the future.
In my opinion those changes will make our lives worst than IT IS now.
First of all, due to 'the' (niepotr) global warming the environment is changing
for example, the oceans temperature 'goes up' (tutaj trzeba na wyzszym szczeblu, napisz slowo 'rises'). It may cause THE melting of THE glaciers. As a result, the water level will 'raise' (zle slowo-popraw) and some places will
be flooded. Many ecosystems will be damaged and it may lead to
extermination of many 'animals' ANIMAL species.
With increased floods and droughts we will be in 'dangerous' (zle slowo-popraw).
Moreover, people will have to get used to the new 'conditionals' (zle slowo-popraw) and environments. In some areas there will be higher temperature than in
the past and in other areas IT will be lower.
What is more, the new climate may be the reason 'of' FOR new kind of illnesses and viruses. 'It' (nie wiem co czego to 'it sie odnosi) is also very dangerous for our health.
More and more money we will BE spent on treatments and 'protecting from them' (do czego 'them' sie odnosi?).
Those changes will have huge influence on plants and 'animals' ANIMAL life, economy and our health.

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