Mogłby mi to ktos sprawdzić, PILNE

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Nie jestem wybitna z angielskiego dlatego bardzo proszę was o sprawdzenie i poprawienie tego co napisałam, dziękuje z góry

Dear Daryl,
Thank you for your last letter reached me on Monday.
I was sorry to hear about hour problem.
Why do not you say everything your parents.
They love you and certainly would have helped to bring.
Do not be afraid of their
You should fix them now what to do next
The best thing you can do is change in attitude to the situation.
It would be a good idea to finding a good tutor.
You should spend more time learning and solving homework.
For some time the school should be in first place.
You must make up all arrears.
You shouldn’t now meet with friends and play on the computer.
I hope this helps you. Let me know what happens. Thing will get better soon.
Good luck,
Auntie Claire
Skopiowałem tekst, tak będzie wygodniej. W nawiasie będą zmienione wyrazy, wystarczy że później skasujesz znaki "(" i ")" :)

>Dear Daryl,
>Thank you for your last letter (received) on Monday.
>I'm sorry to (hear) about your problem.
>(Why don't you want to say) everything to your parents(?)
>They love you and certainly would help in troubles.
>Do not be afraid of their (reaction).
>You should fix them now what to do next (kompletnie nie wiem o co chodzi)
>The best thing you can do is (to) change in attitude to the situation. (też nie wiem)
>It would be a good idea to *find) a good tutor.
>You should spend more time (at) learning and (doing) homework.
>For some time the school should be in (the) first place (of your time).
>You must make up all arrears.
>You shouldn't now meet with friends and play on the computer.
>I hope that will help you. Let me know what happens. Thing will get better
>soon. (?)
>Good luck,
>Auntie Claire

Uff.. :)
They love you and certainly would help in troubles. - TO JEST ZLE
>You should fix them now what to do next (kompletnie nie wiem o co
chodzi)...ja tez nie...jakas magia...
The best thing you can do is (to) change in attitude to the
situation. (też nie wiem)...tez nie wiem
You should spend more time (at) (popraw, tutaj 'at' nie jest gram.) learning and (doing) homework.
For some time the school should be in (the) first place (of your
time)....TO JEST ZLE - tego nie rozumiem
You shouldn't now meet with friends and play on the computer.- TO JEST ZLE
I hope that (ALE CO?) will help you.
'Thing' will get better - TO JEST ZLE

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