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Supermarkety kontra niewielkie sklepy.

Everyday, each of us, must go shopping (woman can all day long). Sometimes we think about what kind of shop is better for us (and our wallet). Which choice will be better ?
The most important advantage of shop in supermarkets is that you can buy a goods at lower prices. This is a main problem for almost everyone. Nowadays, economis crisis has caused this situation. What more, in a supermarkets are always sales. Another good thing is that hypermarcet cause decrease unemployment. Probably, the best way in the fight against this phenomenon is creating such huge shops. Furthermore, people decide to buy in supermarkets because they have a large selection of products. Besides, these products are located on the same shelf. It gives the customers feeling of comfort and pleasure to buy.
On the other hand, shop in a small shops have advantage too. Firstly,
people do not have to stand in a long queue. Generally, they do not like crowded places and feel better in a free spaces. It follows that in a small shops people feel mental comfort. One can be sure - in such stores you will be served by a friendly service. Although your wallet will be slimmer but you should remember - products in small shops have always better quality, and health is most important.
To sum up, supermarkets and small shops have advantages. However, it is worth to consider two outputs: cheaply, but weakly or expensive but good quality. The choice is up to you!

Nie jestem mocna z pisania, krytykę chętnie przyjmę :).
Everyday, each of us, 'must' (to jest za silnie - bo mozemy chodzic na zakupy raz na tyg, miesiac, nie kazdego dnia) go shopping (woman can ('can' ale co? make love, kiss? sing?- I know which I like)) all day long).
The most important advantage of shopPING in supermarkets is that you
can buy 'a' (przed l. mnoga nie dajemy 'a') goods at lower prices. This is a main 'problem' (to nie jest problem, bo przeciez oszczedzaja pieniadze-jaki to problem?) for almost everyone. Nowadays, THE 'economis' (ortog) crisis has caused this situation (ale jaka?- to jest niewyrazne). What IS more, in 'a' (niepotr) supermarkets THERE are always sales. Another good thing is that 'hypermarcet' (ortog) cause decrease IN unemployment (ale w jaki sposob?). Probably, the best way in the fight against 'this phenomenon' (jaki phenomenon- bo nie napisales) is creating such huge shops.
Furthermore, people decide to buy in supermarkets because 'they' (to znaczy kto? ludzie czy supermarkets?) have a large selection of products. Besides, these products are located on the same shelf (no chyba nie wszystkie). It gives the customers feeling of comfort and pleasure 'to buy' WHEN BUYING.
On the other hand, shopPING in 'a' (niepotr) small shops 'have' HAS (shopping has) advantage too.
Generally, they do not like crowded places and feel better in 'a' (niepotr) free spaces. It follows that in 'a small shops' (in 'a small shop' albo 'in small shops') people feel mental comfort. One can be sure - in such
'stores' (nie mieszaj - albo shops albo stores) you will be served by a friendly 'service' (tu napisz 'assistant').
To sum up, BOTH supermarkets and small shops have advantages. However, it
is worth 'to consider' CONSIDERING THE two outputs: cheaply, 'but weakly' (tego cos nie rozumiem) or expensive but good quality.

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