Piosenka którą napisałam!! ;))

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Sometimes I feel that you open my eyes
You show me the world full of lullabays
Learn me how to fly
and catch my breath when I thinking about goodbye

So pleas tell my whats wrong with us
why you try to stop keep this trust
I know that we are so far away
And let it be...I will understand


I was all the time afraid
sometimes scarry about the end
but in my heart,was only U
doing everything to show how i wont to go this through

I dont belive people,they will always talking
I belive in my destiny
I belive in you and me
I wish that it would be the biggest surprise
to know what you feel about Us

So this charming man..must give me him hand
and show me this beautifull places
where i could grown up and start sthg new
because nothing else i wont..just be with U


Please tell me that it could be thruth..
make me belive...
take me in...
fell you in the air..
hope you will always care...
my dream..
my fairy tale ;)



bardzo prosze o pomoc w sprawdzeniu,miałam prace domową napisac piosenke i nie wiem czy poprawnie gramatycznie,prosze o pomoc
pozdrawiam serdecznie i licze na was :))
Nie zaglebialam sie w tresc merytoryczna :)

Sometimes I feel that you open my eyes
You show me the world full of [lullabays] lullabies
[Learn] Teach me how to fly
and catch my breath when I thinking (when I think/when I'm thinking) about goodbye

So, pleas, tell my what's wrong with us
why you try to stop keep this trust
I know that we are so far away
And let it be...I will understand


I was all the time afraid
sometimes [scarry] scarried about the end
but in my heart,[was] (poprawne "were" nie zmieni tu rytmu) only U
doing everything to show how I [wont] (won't czy want?) to go this through

I don't beliEve people,they will always talking (they will always talk/they'll always talk/they're always taking
I beliEve in my destiny
I beliEve in you and me
I wish that it would be the biggest surprise
to know what you feel about Us

So, this charming man..must give me [him] his hand
and show me this beautiful places
where I could [grown] grow up and start sthg new
because THERE'S nothing else I wont..just be(ing) with U


Please tell me that it could be [thruth] truth..
make me beliEve...
take me in...
fell you in the air..
hope you will always care...
my dream..
my fairy tale ;)

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