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Group for people very serious about improving results of recruitment process. If you have new idea or vision regarding effective recruitment join us!
We welcome recruitment and selection professionals who are interested in expanding their knowledge regarding the most effective and recent recruitment techniques. The best software, the most effective interpersonal strategies, projecting great AC/DC.
Group for people very serious about improving good results of recruitment process. If you have new idea or vision regarding effective recruitment join us !

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