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Book`s action is in time when President of USA was Thomas Woodrow Wilson (1913-1921) and Warren Gamaliel Harding (1921-1923).
Woodrow Wilson was democrat. He pasage three act : Underwood Act (reduction stake duty), Federal Reserve Act (better administered economy) and the last was about Federal Trade Commission. It was time when the came down many changes.Tomas Woodrow Wilson made many status for better life. He waged war Germany and He wanted peace on World. He established League of Nations. His successor was Warren Harding.
Warren Harding was republican and He lifted all statues, which introduced Wilson. When Harding ruled everything was not good. He made mayhem and people don`t knew what they could. His acts was complicated for „grey citizien”


Akcja książki dzieje się w czasie kiedy prezydentem USA był Thomas Woodrow Wilson i Waren Harding.
Woodrow Wilson był demokratą. On ustawić trzy ustawy : Underwood Act (redukcja cen na cło), Federal Reserve Act (lepsze zarządzanie gospodarką) i ostatni Federal Trade Commision. To był czas, wielu zmian. Thomas Woodrow Wilson zrobił wiele ustaw które poprawiały życie obywateli. On wypowiedział wojnę Niemcom, chciał pokoju na świecie. Pował Ligę Narodów. Jego następcą był Warren Harding. Warren Harding był republikaninem, zniósł wszystkie ustawy które wprowadził Wilson. Kiedy Harding rządził wszystko było niejasne. On doprowadził do chaosu i do tego, że nie ludzie nie wiedzieli jakie mają prawa. Jego ustawy były zbyt skomplikowane dla szarych obywate
Proszę, to dla mnie ważne.
W każdym zdaniu błąd. Poprawić się nie da; trzeba od początku napisać.
Ale jakiego typu błędy, tekst był pisany na szybko i stąd one...
Book had action when President of USA was Thomas Woodrow Wilson (1913-1921) and Warren Gamaliel Harding (1921-1923).
Woodrow Wilson was democrat. He instituted three acts : Underwood Act (reduction price (value) of duty ), Federal Reserve Act (better administered economy) and the last was about Federal Trade Commission. It was of many changes. Tomas Woodrow Wilson made many status for better life. He waged war Germany and He wanted peace on World. He established League of Nations. His successor was Warren Harding.
Warren Harding was republican and He lifted all statues, which introduced Wilson. When Harding ruled everything was in bad way.He made mayhem and people don`t known what they could. His acts was complicated for "grey citizien"
Trochę lepiej czy nadal okropnie ?
Gdzie są te błędy ? W czasie, w użytych słówkach ?
In Twenties Years in USA politics was Bad. It was time the largest
development. Politician quarelled for everything. We must remember, that in chamber of deputies were the same numbers of republicans and democrats.It was hard time for USA.

Dopisałam coś takiego, bardzo proszę albo o poprawę, albo o powiedziec mi co jest nie tak.
Dalej jest źle. Używaj prostych zdań jeśli z takimi sobie nie radzisz. Jak nauczysz się lepiej angielskiego to wtedy będziesz mogła się popisać, bo niestety teraz piszesz tekst ponad swoje siły.
Book had action in time when President of USA was Thomas Woodrow Wilson (1913-1921) and Warren Gamaliel Harding (1921-1923).
Woodrow Wilson was democrat. He created three acts : Underwood Act , Federal Reserve Act and Federal Trade Commission.
In this years were many incident.
Tomas Woodrow Wilson performed many acta.
He waged war with Germany and He wanted peace on world.
He established League of Nations.
His successor was Warren Harding.
Warren Harding was republican,
He removed all Wilson acts.
He wasn`t good President.
He made disorder and people don`t known what they could.
His acts were Bad and so difficult for "grey citizien"
In Twenties Years in Politics were Bad.
It was time the largest development.
We must remember, that in chamber of deputies were the same republicans and democrats.It was hard time for USA.




Ten tekst jest dla mnie naprawde wazny, czy ktos moglby go poprawic ?
Juz nie widze gdzie sa bledy :(
Proszę was wszystkich :(
Book had action DURING THE time when THE PresidentS of USA WERE Thomas Woodrow
Wilson (1913-1921) and Warren Gamaliel Harding (1921-1923).
Woodrow Wilson was A Democrat. He created three acts: THE Underwood Act,
THE Federal Reserve Act and THE Federal Trade Commission (czy to act?).
DURING THESE years THERE were many incidentS.
THomas Woodrow Wilson performed many actS.
He waged war with Germany and he wanted peace IN THE world.
He established THE League of Nations.
His successor was Warren Harding.
Warren Harding was A Republican,
He removed all THE Wilson acts.
He wasn`t A good President.
HIS ACTIONS RESULTED IN disorder and people DIDN'T KNOW WHAT THEY could AND COULD NOT DO.
His acts were bad (znajdz inne slowo na 'bad') and VERY difficult for THE "grey citizen"
In THE TWENTIES Politics were bad (znajdz inne slowo na 'bad'co to znaczy)
It was THE time OF the largest development.
We must remember, that in THE Chamber of Deputies THERE were the same NUMBER OF Republicans and Democrats. It was A hard time for THE USA.
Dziękuje Ci bardzo !:)
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