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Błagam o poprawienie...mam to na jutro:(:(


My favourite book is "Ania z Zielonego Wzgórza". It was written by Lucy Mount Montgomery in 1908.It's a novel.Main hero is Ania Shirley.The story happen in Avonlea in XIX century. The book is about a girl who is daughter Berty and Waltera Shirley, but her parents dead. Always strange people look after her.She is friendly and she likes spending time with her friend.She has got a many adventure some are funny.She is very talented and wise.She likes dream.Once day she dyed hair because she hates red haired.Kids called her "carrot".
I liked this book because of it's lively and intriguing plot.She is a adventures are really fantastic and I read about them with a big interest.It's cool book because it's about teenergers problems and abought their life.

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My favourite book is "Ania z Zielonego Wzgórza". It was written by
>Lucy Mount Montgomery in 1908.It's a novel.The main character is Ania
>Shirley.The story happens in Avonlea in XIX century. The book is about
>a girl who is a daughter of Berta and Walter Shirley, but they are
>dead. Unfortunately usually strange people look after her.She is friendly and she
>likes spending time with her friend.She has got many adventures some
>are funny.She is very talented and wise.She likes to dream.One day she
>dyed her hair because she hates its colour.Kids called her "carrot".
>I liked this book because of it's lively and intriguing plot.Adventures are really fantastic and I read them with a big
>interest.It's a nice book because it's about teenagers problems and
>about their life.

słowo cool było napisane poprawnie ale skoro jest to wypracowanie do szkoły to chyba lepiej żebyś w nim slangu nie używała ;)

Donald Franciszek Tusk (born April 22, 1957 in Gdansk, Poland) - Polish politician, a trained historian, President of the Council of Ministers on 16 November 2007, the chairman of the Civic Platform. Chairman of the Parliamentary Caucus PO from 5 November 2005 to 5 December 2006, Deputy Speaker of the Senate fourth term in 1997-2001, Deputy Speaker of the Sejm of the fourth term in 2[tel], the fourth term senator, member of Parliament I, IV, V, VI term, the candidate for the office of President in 2005.
Sprawdzcie mi prosze was na jutro potrzebne

In my free time i just like to relax by reading a good book, watching TV or surfing the Net. Of course I also like some outdoor activities. If the weather is nice I go for a walk with my dog or get on the bicycle and simply ride forward. It helps me clear my mind after a stressful, exhausting day in school. However sometimes it's better to get togheter and just hang out with some friends than be just by myself. We can go see a movie, play cards or some boardgames or just sit around and talk for hours.
Jeszcze to prosze was pomóżcie na jutro