Futhermore Jamie always looks modest. Without 'fashion' (zla czesc mowy) clothes and (tu brakuje 2 slowa) simple haircut she doesn’t (tu brakuje czasownika) 'River' (brakuje possessive- River'S) attention. People treat her like 'an air' (co to?) . As far as 'i’m' (I piszemy ZAWSZE duza litera) 'concern' CONCERNED 'today is 'similary' (zla czesc mowy - ale i tak nie rozumiem tego). Appearance 'play' (tu ma byc 3os.l.poj) an important role in life. Even Jamie experienced after (brak przedimka) performance that people are nicer when you look beautiful and wear better 'cloths.' (cloth-to jest szmata-popraw)
On the other hand (brak przedimka) polite and religious person can have friends and 'to' (niepotr) be respected among the young people. Everything depends on (brak przedimka) person’s character. Everyone has rules in life and nobody likes when other (other CO?-popraw) try to impose ON him or her their views.