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(…) I think that main reason for young people turning to drugs are problems at school. Bad marks and problems with teachers could be an explanation for frustration and irritability. Drugs seem to be the easiest way escape from unpleasant reality.

Another factor are problems at home. Children from broken home in witch parents overuse alcohol are more open to turn to drugs. Although lack of time for children and the pursuit parents of money are reasons that kids feel lonely, unwanted and through taking drugs try to get their parents attention.

One cause of turn to drugs is desire to try something new. Drugs are easy to get so because of boredom and a lot of spare time teenagers want to experience something exciting and unusual. They are often encouraged by their friends.

A reason why young people are turning to drugs might be dissatisfaction with their life. When there is no hope for job or better future, drugs are escape from troubles, poverty and uninteresting life.

To sum up young people turn to drug because they believe that it is the easiest and only one way to escape from all trouble. They often don’t know how many dangers might it couse. In my opinion drugs aren’t any solutions to the problems. Taking drugs lead to depression, unconsciousness or even death.

Wiem, że dla wielu z Was spradzenie takiego tekstu to kwestia kilku minutek, więc bardzo ładnie prosze :-)

...THE main reason...THE problems...Bad...and issues (zeby nie powtzrzac "problems" moze?).
...way TO escape...
...broken homeS in WHICH (...) are more PRONE to turn...(to be open to - to do uzycia bardziej w pozytywnym znaczeniu).
To "although" tu nie pasuje,zdanie powinno brzmiec:
The parents' pursuit of money and their lack of time for children make the latter ("ci ostatni"- w domysle "children",ale zeby nie powtarzac) feel lonely and unwanted. So by taking drugs they try to get their parents' attention.
Another cause for starting drugs is THE desire...Drugs are also easy to get. And because of boredom and a lot of spare time that teenagers have,they want to...(...)
A reason...might be also their dissatisfaction with life.
...no hope for A job or A better future, drugs are AN escape from THE troubles, THE poverty and THE uninteresting life.
To sum up, ...the easiest and only way...from all troubles. (...) how much danger it might cause. (...) aren't a solution to the problems.(...)leadS(...)