I wish to apply for 'a' ( a ile tych courses maja, jak jeden to daj dokladna nazwe kursu) Psychology course for the 2[tel]academic year.
'I wish to provide some further information about myself' (wg mnie niepotr - i do tego maslo maslane..zacznij. My motivation for ...choosing this course IS............'My name is Kamila ..., originally I am from Poland' (to jest calkowicie niepotr - bo to chyba beda mieli na twojej aplikacji - nie musza miec tego powtarzane). I have studied 'Pedagogy' (musisz napisac dokldniej co i jak) at University of Wroclaw for one year (kiedy podaj kdokladny rok) before I 'decided to' (niepotr) moveD to (a gdzoe jest przedimek?) United Kingdom.
'I have always been very active in school volunteering' (to zdanie jest nieladne - nie rozumiem co to ma do rzeczy). 'It started when I was 13 years old' (trzeba to ujac w pierwszym zdaniu...Since I was 13 I have...). 'I was doing there' (tyo jest niepopr gramat. I DID) many different 'works' (calkowicie zle slowo) like helping in school for 'blind' (nie uzywamy tego slowo, okreslenie to jest 'visually impaired' i nie zadne kids tylko children) kids. I 'was helping' (dlaczego nie piszesz tak jak powinno byc...I helped them with..) them with their 'home works' (napisz to jedno slowo poprawnie), spending free time together, 'it was being' (a nie lepiej...in a capacity of a guardian) kind of guardian for them. I 'was helping kids' (helped children) with 'down syndrome' (popraw ale i musza byc DUZE litery) to get home safely and 'take' (ale to robilas wczesniej to musisz uzywac czasu przeszlego TOOK) part with them in theatre lessons. When I 'get' (zle slowo) to high school my volunteering work changed. I started to work with 'kids' (children) 'having' (zle slowo) cancer, helping them doing daily activities but also making sure their frame of mind 'is good' (za bardzxo kolokwialne - i tak to w ogole co to znaczy, wiecej szczegolow). 'Except' (calkowicie zle slowo) that I 'was taking' (took) part in many 'programs' (popraw zle slowo) and 'trainings' (od kiedy to jest l. mnoga?) for guardians. 'In' (zle sloeo( brak przedimka) same time 'as a part of volunteering' (niepotr) I 'am giving' GAVE Mathematics and English lessons for 'kids' (children) from (a gdzie przedimek - i czy to jest udokumentowane kiedy, jaki wiek, wiwcej szczegolow) neighborhood. Through I always had many extra activities I always tried to make sure that I never neglectED my 'school works' (napisz to poprawnie). I 'think' (ty mozesz to tak myslec, ale nie przekonuj drugiej osoby, daj inne slowo) it shows that I am (a gdzie przedimek?) responsible person because I always meet (tu cos brak) obligations. I am (przedimek) very enthusiastic person. 'which helps me doing my work' (niepotr). I do not have problems with meeting new people, I am very 'social' (zle slowo) person.
The course I 'was studying' STUDIED in Poland 'was very interesting' (to jest opinia nie FAKT - musisz to udowodnic) and didactic. I 'had classes from' STUDIED General Psychology, Psychology of Human Development, Theory of Education and 'many other ones' (a np - ja mam tutaj zgadywac jakie, bo Tobie sie nie chce dokladnie napisac) connected with Education and child development. After (brak przedimka) first year I realized that studying Psychology would give me (przedimek) better opportunity to understand 'of' (niepotr) the reality 'that' (niepotr) surroundING me, help me to find solutions of many different problems, (tutaj cos jest nie tak, cos brak) capabilities and human development. I would like to deepen my knowledge about the human 'psychics,' (cos nie lubie tego slowo - zmien) personalities. I think THAT self-improvement and self-development are very important. ' as well in that kind of studies' (niepotr i jeszcze z bledami). Studying Psychology would give me an opportunity to understand social life and mechanisms operatING in 'there' (a dokladnie gdzie - bo nie piszesz.)
I am very excited about the opportunity (cos brak) studying in United Kingdom. I always had 'big' (nieladne slowo, tutaj trzeba 'academickich' slow) interest in different cultures. 'than mine' (niepotr). 'I know living in other country would give me big chance to improve my language skills' (ale przeciez nie aplikujesz na kurs jezyka angielskiego - ), make new friends and would let me to improve that I am independent person as well as I am very easy to work in groups.
In summary I am very enthusiastic about the opportunities this course will offer me. I believe that my previous experience and strong motivation and makes me a expedient candidate for this course.
Ja tutaj nie za bardzo widze, w jaki sposob moge polaczyc twoje 'volunteering' z tym kursem. Musisz to napisac tak, zeby ktos byl przekonany, a co ja widze, to jest to, ze chcesz sobie jezyk podszlifowac, chcialabys sie dowiedziec jak ludzie mysla. Niema nic o osiagnieciach ktore juz masz za soba, malo piszesz o Uni of Wroclaw i co Ci to dalo - i w jaki sposob to sie wszystko laczy.
Pomysl, ze oni czytaja tysiace takich listow i twoj musi byc wyjatkowy.