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Hi Laura,
How are you doing? Sorry I didn't write earlier.
I organised a birthday party for my dad last Saturday. I invited a few colleague my dad. Came also my grandparents, aunts and uncles. On the table lacked of food. the food was fantastic! togther with my mom cooked. Grandmother and aunts brought cake. I made apple pie and birthday cake. For dessert was ice cream. the dinner was roast chicken, mixed salad, potatoes, shepherd's pie and tomato soup. to drinks were fruits juice, coca- cola, tea and coffee.

Sorry for not writing for so long, but i've been very busy with making a party for my dad.

It was his 40ty birthday last Saturday. My mum bought him a present and i baked the birthday cake.

i've invited my grandparents, my aunt and uncle and my cousin- Sarah. There was a lot of food made by my mum. The most delicious were lasagne and spaghetti. My mum bought a champaign and few bootles of cola and fanta. The guests really enjoyed the party. They said, that the cake was great. My dad was very happy. He got lots of presents. The one, that i like the most is a t-shirt with superman.

Ktos ci to napisal?
Ok, oddaj, dostaniesz 3 i zdasz, ale cale zycie bedziesz jednojezyczna

I obeszło się bez translatora;)
champagne
I (ja) zawsze z WIELKIEJ litery;)
bootles?

Ona tego sama nie napisala, scherlocku

sama pisałam to 1. bez niczyjej pomocy. A z angielskiego mam 4 a 5.

jezeli to prawda, to masz bardzo nierówną formę

40ty birthday

to 2 to nie moje

co w ty 1 (moim) jest źle?
I to nie do szkoły. Bo ja jestem samoukiem.

samouk, ktory ma stopnie z angielskiego?

mam różne kury sprawdzające. Które zdaje na oceny. A dokładnie na procenty.

already approached it? : )

I'm afraid I did

More than 10 years ago? :)

no

I'd like mg, zielonosiwy, Aaric, sav, and Terri to send their selfies.

I could do that but then I would have to nuke this site back to the stone age.
I have a mug that only a mother could love:)

And what about you, smartas$:)? You came up with this, right, lead by example:)

I only hope zielonosiwy doesn't look like this one ( no offense):-)

http://www.teamjimmyjoe.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/05/Fun-with-Mugshots-Bug-Eye.jpg

I can't, I'm already too popular with women :)

challange accepted but I have problems setting my photo here as an avatar ; (

A link to your Facebook profile will do :)

no way

I believe you, and you look ok here, I have to tell you that. This is actually how I imagined you, but she's just, let me think, ....gorgeous!:))

http://www.funnypica.com/wp-content/uploads/2012/06/funny-fat-women-choice-man.jpg

Whatever floats your boat, man. You have my unflinching support. Always:)

You can't possibly say "float" and refer to the photograph, can you? :)

Why? Floating might work here:)
Well, if it doesn't, we have to look at the other bright side.
Say, If you were in the Big Apple right now, and they'are talking about this ugly monster blizzard on Fox, shutting down literally everything, can you imagine how much warmth she could give a man during this kind of weather?