Jakie błędy popełniłam?

Temat przeniesiony do archwium.
1) I think that people are so cheerful when they getting a presents. They feel very appreciated and unique. It's a big pleasure to get an unexpected present from someone you love. I think that money aren't very important with these situations. If you want make someone pleasure you should spend money of that.
2) These days children getting too rich presents from their relatives. I think that people should buy presents for children only for special occasions.
3) For me it's better to give someone presents. People are very suprised and they think better about you. You could make their happy.
a presents - zły przedimek
money aren't - źle, money jest niepoliczalne
with these situations - niezrozumiałe, przynajmniej dla mnie
if you want to make someone happy ...
spend money ON
children BRAK SŁOWA getting
rich presents to zła kolokacja
on special occasions
their - złe słowo, to znaczy ich np. rzecz
Dziękuję, spróbuję poprawić błędy, co do "with these situations" miałam na myśli: w takich sytuacjach. Jak to zdanie można poprawnie napisać?
np. when it comes to buying a gift for someone you love
suprised

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