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Subject:Technical advance
Dear Sir or Madame,
I would like to tell you a few words about technical devices used in my house.
It is hard to find somebody who in the 21st century is using no technical devides. Both my family and I do not imagine life without technology. Every member of my family has a smartphone. We use them to contact wich eachother, but also for surfing the internet or listening to music. My family also has a TV and a computer, which we mostly use for watching movies.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
XYZ
wiem, że ''technical devides'' powtarza się ale nie wiem jakim innym zwrotem zastąpić urządzenia techniczne. No i wstęp jest dość słaby