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In the future I would like to be a doctor. Why? There are many advantages. This job needs courage, strength and accuracy. Working as a doctor provides emotion and andrenalin. I would like to help people who suffer from serious disease or carry on an surgery, thank to that people would stay alive. I want to learn about secrets of human body. Doctor must be responsible. In this job you can earn lots of money. I think that work in hospital isn't easy.
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provides emotions and brings andrenaline

Wersja adrenalin bez e ma inklinacje medyczną, częściej pojawia się w kontekście adrenaliny podawanej jako lek. Adrenalina w codziennym, przenośnym użyciu to najczęściej adrenaline.

people who have surgery albo go through surgery