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There are
two main situations where listening to music through earphones can be harmful, or even dangerous.
Commuting, learning, reading and many more everyday activities are often accompanied by earphones. Music helps us
to reduce
the stress and simply relax. However, many people listen to it too loudly, which can cause a temporary or even pernament hearing loss. Earphones play an important role in this process, as they provide a very intesive sound straight to the ear
[+] and this is why they can be extremely harmful.
Unfortunately, there is
an even bigger drawback of using earphones. People often e.g. cross the [+] forgetting to make sure that a car is not coming up, simply because they are concetrated on music. In other words, earphones can easily sep
arate us from the enviro
nment, which can
lead to very unpleasant consequences.
To sum up, listening to music through earphones can be a great way to relax, providing that we do not listen to it too loudly and we do not forget about the surroudings.
edytowany przez sssspppp: 21 paź 2017