The Sun Also Rises - fragment #2

Later in the day we learned that the man who was killed was named Vicente Girones, and came from near Tafalla.

Czy nie powinno być: "Later in the day we learned that the man who had beenkilled had beennamed Vicente Girones, and came from near Tafalla.

o takim uzyciu mozna by powiedziec, ze jest 'hypercorrect', co nie oznacza, ze jest niepoprawne

had been killed moze byc
had been named jest nienaturalne, mogloby oznaczac 'zostal nazwany', gdyby ktos nadal mu jakies specjalne imie, np. w sekcie.

No, on all counts.