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Professional Summary
I am an experienced operator of several years of Cnc and Metal processing machines with
knowledge of technical drawing and basic mechanical knowledge
Work Experience
04.2014-11.2016
Ergo Arena(Entertainment hall), Gdańsk(Poland)
• Ticket seller
Work on the sale of tickets for events, contact with the client and taking care of the company's
presence
11.2016–01.2017
Lpp warehouse(Clothing warehouse), Pruszcz Gdański(Poland)
• Warehouse worker / Reach truck operator
Loading or unloading materials and deliveries, moving them to warehouse areas, labeling deliveries,
completing documentation
03.2017-11.2018
Federal-Mogul Bimet(Manufacture of motor bearings), Gdańsk(Poland)
• Operator Metal processing machines / Operator CNC
Operation of metallurgical machines, replacement of cutting and machining parts depending on the
technical specification, operations with technical drawing guidelines, basic technical repairs of
machines, taking care of the technical condition and completing production documentation
11.2018–03.2020
Pecocar Holland B.V(Porduction of sandwich panels which serve purposes in different
industries), Albergen(Netherlands)
• Builder of sandwich panels / Reach truck operator
Operation of cutting machines, manual processing of cuts and operations of elements with the
guidelines of technical drawing, unloading materials and moving them to warehouse areas,
completing documentation
03.2020–07.2020
Kolk B.V(Production of accessories for water and sewage network infrastructure),
Hengelo(Netherlands)
• Operator Metal processing machines / Operator CNC
Operation of metallurgical machines, replacement of cutting and machining parts depending on the
technical specification, operations with technical drawing guidelines, basic technical repairs of
machines, taking care of the technical condition and completing production documentation
07.2020-present
Ingram Micro(Fulfillment and warehousing services), Waalwijk(Netherlands)
• CMC operator / Orderpicker
Operating the machine and taking care of its condition
Education
09.2012–05.2016
Pomorskie Szkoły Rzemiosł (PSR), Gdańsk
Technician of digital graphic processes and printing
Languages
English — B2
Polish — Native speaker
Dutch — A1
Additional Skills
• Driving license
• Good knowledge of MS Windows, MS OFFICE
• Good knowledge of digital and analog measuring equipment
• Good knowledge of using the technical drawing
• Full commitment to the given tasks/duties
• Communication and team-working skills
• Strongly motivated to develop personal skills
• License for a forklift and reach truck
miesiace lepiej skrotami typu Mar, Nov

pierwsza praca - uzywaj -ing lub rzeczownikow oznaczajacych czynnosci, tak jak w innych wpisach, np. selling tickets,

good technical drawing skills

commitment to execution of assigned tasks/duties - nie pisz full, bo to niewiele znaczy

nie sprawdzalem bardzo dokladnie wszystkich wpisow w historii zatrudnienia, poczekaj na innych jeszcze
np taki szyk
an experienced CNC and metal ... operator of several years
sprawdz definicje 'metal processing'. Chyba nie o to ci chodzi.
Dla mnie to bardzo a bardzo trudno czyta sie to CV.
Jak podajesz prace to zawsze ostatnia idzie pierwsza. Tutaj najpierw musze czytac co robiles 7 lat temu - strta czasu.
Drugie - education, podaj stopien osiagniety i gdzie
Widzialam tez ze ludzie podaja dlugosc pracy w danym miejscu np 1 year 18 months, 2 years.
I am an experienced operator of 'several years' (dla mnie several to 25, podaj dokladnie ile, dla kogos innego to 2,3 lata) of Cnc and Metal processing machines with knowledge of technical drawing and 'basic mechanical knowledge' (ale czego?)
Work Experience
04.2014-11.2016
Ergo Arena(Entertainment hall), Gdańsk(Poland)
• Ticket seller
'Work' (za niskie slowo) on the sale of tickets for events, 'contact with the client' (tutaj 'client contact') and 'taking care of the company's presence' (tego to nawet nie rozumiem, czy to 'promotional work?')
11.2016–01.2017
Lpp warehouse(Clothing warehouse), Pruszcz Gdański(Poland)
• Warehouse worker / Reach truck operator
Loading 'or' (tutaj 'and') unloading OF 'materials and deliveries' (wystarczy 'deliveries'), 'moving them' (za nisko, tutaj 'transporting) to warehouse areas, 'labeling' (sprawdz spel chyba 'labelling) deliveries,
completing documentation
03.2017-11.2018
Federal-Mogul Bimet(Manufacture of motor bearings), Gdańsk(Poland)
• Operator Metal processing machines / Operator CNC
Operation of metallurgical machines, replacement of cutting and machining parts 'depending on the' (tutaj inaczej...according to) technical specification, 'operations' (zle slowo, tutaj operaating) 'with' (zle, tutaj 'within) technical drawing guidelines, basic technical repairs of machines, 'taking care' (za nisko, poszukaj inne slowo) of the technical condition and completing production documentation
11.2018–03.2020
Pecocar Holland B.V(Porduction of sandwich panels 'which serve purposes' (nie, to jest zle, tutaj 'aimed albo takie slowo) in different industries), Albergen(Netherlands)
• Builder of sandwich panels / Reach truck operator
Operation of cutting machines, manual processing of cuts and operations of elements 'with the
guidelines of' (according to) technical drawing (specifications) , unloading materials and moving them to warehouse areas, completing documentation
03.2020–07.2020
Kolk B.V(Production of accessories for water and sewage network infrastructure),
Hengelo(Netherlands)
• Operator Metal processing machines / Operator CNC
Operation of metallurgical machines, replacement of cutting and machining parts 'depending on the' (according to) technical specification, 'operations with technical drawing guidelines' (ja bym to dala inaczej...polacz z zdaniem ...technical specifications and agreed drawing guidelines), basic technical repairs of
machines, 'taking care' (poszukaj inne slowa) of the technical condition and completing production documentation
07.2020-present
Ingram Micro(Fulfillment and warehousing services), Waalwijk(Netherlands)
• CMC operator / Orderpicker
Operating 'the' (nie, tutaj CMC) machine and 'taking care of its condition' (nie, sa specialistyczne slowa na to, poszukaj ich)
Education
09.2012–05.2016
Pomorskie Szkoły Rzemiosł (PSR), Gdańsk (no i co? jakies resultaty)
Technician of digital graphic processes and printing (gdzie, kiedy, resultat)

Additional Skills
• Driving license
• 'Good' (co to znaczy? ) knowledge of MS Windows, MS OFFICE
• Good knowledge of digital and analog measuring equipment (ale do czego?)
• 'Good knowledge' (nie pisz tak, napisz 'experience') of using the technical drawingS
• Full commitment to the given tasks/duties (tego tutaj nie potrzeba)
• Communication and team-working skills (jak juz chcesz, to napisz, experienced in solo working as well as working in teams)
• Strongly motivated to develop personal skills (co to znaczy?)
• License for a forklift and reach truck (dla mnie to powinno byc pierwsze, to jest atut, a nie 'ze jestes motivated' -)
Najpierw co potrafisz, ty masz sie sprzedac komus z twoimi osiagnietymi umiejetnosciami, to ich zaznacz najpierw, to jest wazne.
Cytat: Aaric
np taki szyk
an experienced CNC and metal ... operator of several years
sprawdz definicje 'metal processing'. Chyba nie o to ci chodzi.


metal processing- taką definicję znalazłem na obróbkę metalu
Pomorskie Szkoły Rzemiosł (PSR), Gdańsk (no i co? jakies resultaty)
Technician of digital graphic processes and printing (gdzie, kiedy, resultat)- to nazwa kierunk w technikum który podałem wyżej

Nie mogłem znaleźć jak nazywa się stopien technikum i jakie egzaminy zapisać (maturalny i zawowdowy)

• 'Good' (co to znaczy? ) knowledge of MS Windows, MS OFFICE
• Good knowledge of digital and analog measuring equipment (ale do czego?)
• 'Good knowledge' (nie pisz tak, napisz 'experience') of using the technical drawingS
• Full commitment to the given tasks/duties (tego tutaj nie potrzeba)
• Communication and team-working skills (jak juz chcesz, to napisz, experienced in solo working as well as working in teams)
• Strongly motivated to develop personal skills (co to znaczy?)

Te wszystkie punkty znalazłem, tu na forum w podobnym temacie

https://www.ang.pl/forum/pomoc-jezykowa-sprawdzenie/213714
Operation of cutting machines, manual processing of cuts and operations of elements ???
metal processing- taką definicję znalazłem na obróbkę metalu obrobka metalu jest zbyt ogolnym terminem. Sprawdz tutaj:
https://metalltechnik.me/obrobka-metali/
Jezeli pracowales np na tokarkach, frezarkach, szlifierkach itp to tak napisz.
edytowany przez Aaric: 31 mar 2021
Czy chcesz posluchac kogos kto zna sie na rzeczy, czy kopiowac cos, co nawet nie jest sprawdzone. No i to bylo 11 lat temu, od tego czasu, uwierz mi, duzo sie zmienilo.
Szkoda bylo mojego czasu pomagac komus, kto ma to w du....

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