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The place I would like to introduce is my small town. There is twenty tousand people who live here. That town was called town-garden in the pass. Today we have also many parks, planty of unique trees, few fountains, modern swimming pool. In the centre of the town we have beutiful town hall from the sixteen century. We have church of Santa Peter nad Paul, which is on the list of UNESCO. I you look something more you can spend time in magic castel from sixty century, after that you can go for a walk in the romantic scenery in one of our parks. Where moat, moody lights and silent make you relax and feel realy good. My small town is the most lovely place in the world.
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The place I would like to introduce is my small town OF XXXX. There ARE twenty
tHOUSand people who live here (mozna tez the town has 20,000 inhabitants). ThE town was called town-garden in the pass (nie rozumie tego zdania).
Today we have also (also jest niepotrzebne) many parks, plEnty of unique trees, few fountains AND A modern swimming pool. In the centre of the town we have
A beAutiful Town Hall DATING BACK TO the sixteen century. We ALSO have THE church of Santa (nie Santa a SAINT) Peter nad Paul, which is on UNESCO list OF ...
I you (co to znaczy 'I you' - czy masz na mysli 'and you') ...'If you are looking FOR something more' you can go for a walk in the romantic scenery in one of our parks, where A moat, moody lights and silenCE make you relax and feel reaLly good (znajdz inny zwrot na 'really good') My small town is the most lovely place in the world.