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Once upon a time there was princes which was very beautiful lady. Her name was Alamiria. She lived in a big palace in the middle of forest. There was a really strange. Trees were huge and when you look at this you feeling theirs eyes at yourself. She lived alone... She didn’t know somebody. When the san was rising the forest was ugly but when moon was rising the forest was glittering and nice. She loved walk on the forest. One day young leady went for a walk. She went on big meadow and… suddenly she saw a big dragon! He had got a big head with five eyes and seventeen big legs with huge feet. He looked at girl. She started run and then he draw up. A prince was so shock!!! She shouted and unexpectedly from behind a tree emerged prince. Unfortunately some young boy saw this. He quickly killed a monster and save princes. He kissed Alamiria’s and cuddle her. They backed home together. She falls in love to him. And they lived happily ever after.
Once upon a time there was princesS (which- which sie nie pisze o osobach, which to o rzeczach, a WHO o osobach) was 'as'-dlaczego 'as?) very beautiful lady.
She lived in a big palace in the middle of THE forest.
There was a really strange-to zdanie nie ma sensu - najlepiej IT was a really strange place.)
THE trees were huge and when you lookED (czas przeszly) at this you 'feeling'(nie feeling a FELT) their (bez 's') eyes ON YOU.
She didn't know 'somebody' (nie somebody a ANYBODY). When the sUn was rising the forest was 'ugly'(-znajdz inne slowo tutaj) but when THE moon was rising the forest was glittering and nice. She loved TO walk IN the forest. One day THE young lADY went for a walk. She went TO A big meadow and...
He looked at THE girl. She started TO run and then he 'draw up'-tego nie rozumie -czy masz na mysli CAUGHT HER. THE princeSS was IN A STATE OF shock.
She shouted and unexpectedly from behind a tree emerged A prince.
Unfortunately some young boy saw this. He quickly killed THE monster and
saveD (czas przeszly) THE princesS. He kissed Alamiria (bez 's') and cuddleD (czas przeszly) her. They WENT home together. She fELL in love WITH him.