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"this can not be happening to me" I thought. I'm always thinking that fly a plan is safely but I changed my mind in this holiday.
As soon as a holiday started I decided about my holiday. It was every year.I wnted to fly in Egipt. When come day my outlet I was so very happy. I arrived to the airport. I was very excited, before I had benn a little nervous because I will be fly a plane first time.
I was check in and I got on aeroplane. I looked exitedly out of the windows as the aeroplane was taking off into the bright sky. I had been flying for an hour. I feell that it isn't okay. Suddenly stewards said that we must fasten us seatbelts and adding that we had to keep calm. The aeroplane flying straight in darkness clouds. It was darkness and I had benn horrified when started aeroplane trembled. I had thinking that I won't get up livly in aeroplane. It was for fivteen minutes. When suddenly coming brightness and stewardes told us it is all over. I was heaving a sigh of relief . The plan must come back in airport and I didnt fly to Egipt. The plan finally touched down safely and I come back home. I sill don't believe what happened to me. I never supposed that my holiday might be like this finished. I always thinking that this can not be happening to me.

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tema: a magazine is running a short story competetion. To enter the competition you have submit a story starting withe them words "This can't be happening to me" she thought.

This can not be happening to me" I thought. I'm always thinking that
flyING IN a 'plan' (masz na mysli planE?) is 'safely' (nie, moze safer?) but I changed my mind ON this holiday.
As soon as THE holiday started 'I decided about my holiday' (cos tu nie tak - zdanie nie ma sensu).' 'It was every year'-(co bylo every year?).I wAnted to fly TO EgYpt. When THE DAY CAME my 'outlet' (napewno nie, znajdz dokladne slowo) I was so very happy. I arrived AT the airport. I was very excited, before THAT I had beEn a little nervous because I will be flyING ON plane FOR THE first time.
I was 'check in' (tutaj potrzeba czas przeszly) and I got on THE aeroplane. I looked exitedly out of the window as the aeroplane was taking off into the bright sky. I had been flying for an hour. I feLT that it 'isn't' (tutaj potrzeba czas przeszly) 'okay' (nie, lepiej I felt that everything was not all right). Suddenly THE stewardESS said that we must fasten 'us' (nie - tutaj potrzeba 'our'-nasze) seatbelts and addED that we haVE to keep calm. The aeroplane WAS flying straight inTO dark cloudS. IT was dark and I had beEn horrified when THE aeroplane STARTED TO tremble. I thOUGHT that I won't 'get up' (Nie, chyba masz na mysli get out) 'livly' (nie, tutaj potrzeba alive) FROM THE aeroplane. It was LIKE THAT for 15 minutes. When suddenly BRIGHTNESS CAME and THE stewardesS told us THAT it WAS all over. I 'was having' (wystarczy 'had') a sigh of relief . The planE (plan, to jest cos innego, sprawdz w slowniku) must 'come back' (lepiej return) TO THE airport and I didnt fly to EgYpt. The planE finally touched down safely and I 'come back'(returned) home. I sTill 'don't' (tutaj czas przeszly - didn't) believe what HAD happenedto me. I never supposed that my holiday might FINISH like this. I always thOUGHT that this cOULD not happen to me.
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