Hey
This is for my college application so please take a look and tell me if everything is alright. Please remember that this is for college and hence it has to be hmm..."spotless?" :) thanks1
PS-American English used!
"Participant in a fundraiser for building special facilities for the needy youth in the local community." -> About voluntary work
"local field trip with German students from Berlin who came to see Upper Silesia and Poland" -> About German club
"Participation in a major debate about the role of Poland in the European union; local politicians and members of The Polish Robert Schuman Foundation were involved in the debate" -> About a debate club
"During my exchange year in the United States, I faced and fought against discrimination just to have to right to even apply to xxx. That was the reason why although I have attended two high school, I had to take the GED examination. This experienced is thoroughly described in my application essay." -> special circumstances
Once again thanks!