pilne! proszÄ™ o sprawdzenie

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Zadanie jest długie ale ja mam czas do północy jeśli ktoś by mógł je sprawdzić to będę bardzo wdzięczna. Wysyłałam już część tego zadania do sprawdzenia teraz wysyłam już całe i gotowe.

It has been three years since Poland joined EU. May 1st People overwhelmingly voted to support accession and now the vast majority of them recognize the benefits which are associated with it. Joining the European Union has given Poland the possibility of improving our national situation in business among other things. Being a member of the European Union is a great chance which we should take advantage.

First of all open borders enable Poland run a freely business in the area of European Union. Freely flow the polish products within the framework of internal market means abolition of duty between the country of member. This phenomena contribute to that some of polish business can develop. We have possibility launch Polish products therefore some of them became well-know in another country.

Secondly, along with joining to European Union in Poland have been occurred rapidly flow foreign capital. International business became invest in Poland by building new working place or by helping this business which go bankrupt. This had a big positive influence for economical growth in Poland. After joining to European Union is sad that conditions to run a business activity in Poland positively improve.

On the other hand if Poland want to equal the level of business another country of member we have to bear a large charges. As a result of long-term retardation in polish business. We have to adapt our market to requirements European Union so this is also connected with large costs. Some of experts says that Poland have to cover a long distance before being a member of European Union became render a profit.

To sum up I strongly believe that joining Poland to European Union brought more benefits than harm. We can ourselves notice how much was change and what is more that polish people stop complaining about their economical situation. Poland received a great chance everything depends if we could use it appropriately.
kasiu-
otworzylas juz 3 watki o tym samym - a wystarczyloby w jednym watku.
Nikt nie chce powtarzac tych samych poprawek z innego watku.
Secondly, 'along with' (moze lepiej ...another benefit of) joining 'to'(bez to) THE EU 'in' FOR Poland haS been 'occurred' (niepotrz)THE rapid flow OF foreign capital. International business 'became' STARTED TO invest in Poland by building new 'working place' PLACES OF EMPLOYMENT or by helping 'this'THE businessES which 'go' WENT (czas przes) bankrupt. This had a 'big' LARGE positive influence for economiC growth in Poland. After joining 'to' THE EU IT is saId that conditions 'to' FOR runNING 'a'(bez a) business activitIES in Poland positively improveD.

On the other hand if Poland wantS (it wants- 3os lpoj) to equal the level of business OF another country 'of' (niepotr) member we have to bear 'a' (bez a) large charges. As a result of long-term 'retardation' (znajdz inne slowo) in polish business. We have to adapt our market to THE requirements OF THE EU, so 'this is also' WHICH IS connected with large costs. Some of THE experts say (experts l. mn - a say to l. poj) that Poland haS to cover a long distance before (a profit is rendered) FROM being a member of European Union.

To sum up I strongly believe that 'joining Poland' Poland joining) THE 'to' (niepotr) EU brought more benefits than harm. We 'can ourselves' (zla kol slow ..ourselves can) notice how much 'was' HAS changeD and what is more, that Polish people HAVE stopPED complaining about their econoMIC situation. Poland received a great chance AND everything depends ON US, 'if we could' (niepotrz) TO use it appropriately.
tak wiem, ale tutaj jest pozostała część pracy także można pominąć te dwa pierwsze akapity i sprawdzić kolejne które nie były jeszcze umieszczane, dziękuje za sprawdzenie tych dwóch akapitów na tamtych wątku i jeśli można prosiłabym o sprawdzenie pozostałej części pracy
jejku dziękuje jak umieszczałam to wcześniejszą odpowiedź nie widziałam że reszta też już jest sprawdzona, dziękuje bardzo
sorki-zauwazylam-
Some of experts says (experts l. mn - a sayS to l. poj) ...experts say...
jak czytam teraz jakie błędy popełniłam to aż sama się sobie dziwie, po prostu szybko to napisałam i nawet nie zwróciłam uwagi na podstawowe rzeczy jakimi są między innymi czasy, dziękuje bardzo za poprawienie tego całego tekstu i wyjaśnienie tych wszystkich błędów to chyba najważniejsze :) mogę wysłać jeszcze raz całą wersje poprawioną żeby sprawdzić czy wszystkie błędy zostały poprawione.


It has been three years since Poland joined the European Union. On May 1st people overwhelmingly voted to support accession and now the vast majority of them recognize the benefits which are associated with it. Joining the European Union has given Poland the possibility of improving our national situation in among other things Polish business. Being a member of the European Union is a great chance which we should take advantage of.

First of all open borders enable Poland to run freely a business in the whole area of the European Union. The free flow of polish products within the framework of internal market means the abolition of duty between the country members. This phenomena contributes to the fact that some of polish business can develop. As we have possibility to launch Polish products therefore some of them become well-know in other countries.

Another benefit of joining the European Union for Poland has been the rapid flow of foreign capital. International business started to invest in Poland by building new places of employment or by helping the businesses which went bankrupt. This had a large positive influence for economic growth in Poland. After joining the European Union it is sad that conditions for running business activities in Poland positively improved.

On the other hand if Poland wants to equal the level of business of another country member we have to bear large charges. As a result of long-term delay in polish business. We have to adapt our market to the requirements of the European Union, so which is connected with large costs. Some of experts say that Poland has to cover a long distance before a profit is rendered from being a member of European Union.

To sum up I strongly believe that Poland joining the European Union brought more benefits than harm. We ourselves can notice how much has change and what is more, that polish people have stopped complaining about their economic situation. Poland received a great chance and everything depends on us, to use it appropriately.
zauwazylam to:
This phenomena contributes to the fact that some of polish businessES can develop as we have THE possibility to launch Polish products, therefore ..
As a result of long-term delay in polish business. (czy to jest cale zdanie..?).
Some of THE experts say (albo 'some experts say') that Poland ..
...contributes to the fact that some 'of' ('of' niepotrz) polish...
On the other hand if Poland wants to equal the level of business of another country member we have to bear large charges. As a result of long-term delay in polish business. (chciałam napisać że koszty które musimy ponieść żeby dorównać innym krajom są wynikiem naszego zacofania coś takiego tu miało być :)
teraz bedzie dobrze:
On the other hand if Poland wants to equal the level of business of
another country member, we have to bear large charges WHICH ARE A DIRECT result
of THE long-term 'delay' UNDERINVESTMENT in polish business. (jedno zdanie)
jeszcze raz bardzo dziękuje za pomoc :)
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