pomocy !!!

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moja kochana sorka mnie ninawidzi mam same pozytywne a kaze mi sie poprawiac na 2, zadala mi prace domowa o tresci :Write a story of about 150-200 words which ends with the sentence 'the was the last time she ever saw them'
Kompletnie nie wiem jak to napisac - blagam o pomoc, bo z aglika jestem słaba ze szok i nawet nie wiem o co tu chodzi.Jezeli jest ktos kto moglby mi pomoc to bede bardzo wdzieczna o napisanie lub jakies wskazówki
Mary was a normal, young girl. She studied Law on a very famous university. She was really ambitious and tried very hard to maintain high level of her knowledge. She had 3 friends - Anee, Sue and Jennifer.
One day they decided to go to the seaside. It was very hot, so they took off their clothes and went to the sea. They were swimming and laughing - they just loved to spend time together. Suddenly Mary heard a strange lap and felt that there was something under the water. She yelled at her friends, but they did not hear her - they were too far. Mary came back to the shore and saw a shark near grils! She wanted to call somebody, but there was no reception. She was shouting very loud, but in such a remote place nobody could hear her. Suddenly she saw that the sea colour changed into red. It was her friends' blood. That was terrible! She saw her friends screaming and dying in a gruesome pain and she could not do anything but jump itno the water. But she was not courageous enough. That was the last time she ever saw them.

P.S. Czy mogłabyś napisać mi jaką dostałaś z tego ocenę? Pozdrawiam
Powinna dostać ocenę niedostateczną, bo to nie jest jej własna praca. Zresztą, jak sama napisała, jest słaba z angielskiego więc nauczyciel i tak na pewno pozna, że sama tego nie napisała.
Ja poznaję od razu.
"mam same pozytywne a kaze mi sie poprawiac na 2"
Dobre :D to jak Ty oceny pozytywne chcesz na 2 poprawić? :P
eva74 ty się nie rzucaj po tym forum ;/
emciak-
I to TY piszesz - TY ktory wklejales tu 10 razy to samo i spamowales cale forum.
TY prosisz eva74, zeby sie nie rzucala????
Ja spamowałem forum??!!!
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