crime and fines

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Thanks a milion
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Devise suitable punishments for people who:

1. steal stationary
I think that punishments should be toughened up and fines for shoplifting should increase. Nowadays fines that are provided for shoplifting are not enough and it doesn’t deter potential shoplifters from stealing.

If the fines were higher, shoplifters would think twice before committing a petty crime. When a juvenile offender commits a crime his or her school should know about it so that the teachers can take the proper steps and hold a discussion about petty crimes to give them good examples to follow.

2. break the speed limit when driving
Again, I think that the law should be toughened up. Because the people who break the speed limit are a serious threat to everyone in the street. And again the fines should be higher. I think that reoffenders, recidivists who keep on breaking the speed limit should be banned from driving or be made to take the examination again. Perhaps prison should be provided for this type of crime.

3. leave restaurant without paying the bill
they should pay three times as much as the price of the meal – this type of a punishment would be severe and make them think twice before leaving a restaurant without paying the bill.

I don’t think that making such a person to do the dishes after a day shift would be a good idea because such a person would break and shatter all the plates – this would only double the loss of the restaurant’s owner.

I think that punishments should be harsher, and fines for shoplifting should increase. Nowadays, fines that are issued for shoplifting are not enough and they don't actually discourage potential shoplifters from stealing.

If the fines were to be higher, shoplifters would think twice before committing such a petty crime. When a juvenile offender commits a crime, his or her school should also know about it, so that the teachers can take proper steps and hold regular discussions/ hold a discussion about such crimes,to ensure other pupils' behaviour is appropriate.

2. break the speed limit when driving
Again, I think that the law should be much harsher than it is. This is because people who break speed limits are a serious threat to others . Therefore I believe that higher fines for such traffic offences should be introduced. I also think that the reoffenders should be banned from driving or at least be made to take the examination again. Perhaps traffic recidivists should be imprisoned.

3. leave restaurant without paying the bill
They should pay three times as much as the price of the meal – this type of punishment would be severe enough and it'll make them think twice before leaving a restaurant again without paying the bill.

I don’t think that making such a person do the dishes after a day shift would be a good idea, because they would probably break and shatter all the plates – this would only double the loss(mozna tez uzyc costs) for the restaurant’s owner.

Stationary, co to jest w BrE /odnosnie kontekstu j.w./?

stationery

Przybory biurowe? Nawet jak... Nic więcej nie kradną?

to bylo w poleceniu w ksiazce

Dziękuję.

a provided for nie może być w pierwszym? Deter też nie może być?

to poprawki błędów czy niekonieczne zmiany tekstu?


Faktycznie, miało być 'stationery'. Ja rozumialem zdanie 'kradną stacjonarnie' steal stationary :-/ .
Steal stationery - kradną materiały biurowe

Ja bym dał impose i nie widzę nic złego z deter SHOPLIFTING

Z jakiej książki jest to zadanie, calf?

Thanks a million

deter ok
provided for nie

z książki instant discussions

@mg
Ja chciałem napisać zdanie "Grzywyny które są przewidziane za sklepową kradzież są niewystarczające"

Jaki tu czasownik dać na 'być przewidzanym"?

fines for shoplifting nie wystarczy?