Rozmowa Kwalifikacyjna

witam mam ogromną prośbe.
niedługo musze jechac na rozmowe kwalifikacyjną do pracy i musze opowiedziec o sobie
przygotowałem juz pierwsza wersje mojej biografi za pomoca słownika internetowego i wiem ze jest tam masa błedów .Jeżeli ktoś byłby tak miły i pomógł mi to poprawic bede naprawde bardzo wdzięczny .

My name is Maciej Wójcik
I have been born in Poland in small city in southern poland
There I live with mother and sister , i have two sisters but my oldest sister lives in italy
I have finished professional school electrician in profession.

If I say about my experience in work
I worked as cashier in big supermarket or as employee on section in hypermarket entertainment ,recreation
But most longer I worked as barman by six months in one of prettiest bar in my city
I liked work barman as I am very communicative and contact person
Creation of drink was topping fun for I because I am person creative and I like challenges

If it walks about my hobby
my favourite way of spending free time is creating music In my home computer
I ‘m a electronic music maker and i create calm ,deep and mysterious sounds this kind of music it’s experimental sounds or simply ambient
I like to observe movies also old movies but publishing novelties also
I read many books too there are novels principally Science-Fiction
Philip K. Dick is my favorite writer because he is able to make in books superbly atmosfere
It concerns too internet and modern technology
my biggest dream it is leave for japan

jest bardzo duzo bledow - poprawie je dzisiaj wieczorem.
Napisz o jaka prace bedziesz sie staral.

zostawie tak, jak wg mnie jest ok
My name is Maciej Wójcik. I WAS born in (nazwe miasta) in Southern Poland.
I LIVE there with mother and two sisters. The other sister lives in Italy.
I am an electrician by profession. (Wszystkie inne szczegoly powinny byc w CV)
...my WORK experience
I worked as A cashier in (mozna dac nazwe jak zagraniczy) supermarket on the entertainment recreation section.
The longest I had a job was as a barman. I worked for 6 months in one of the most prettiest (prettiest-nie uzywa sie tak- mozna 'exclusive') bars in XXX.
I liked being a barman. I feel that I am very communicative and can easily make contacts.
I liked creating different drinks such as XXXXXX because I am a creative person and I like challenges.
....about my hobby (nie mysle, zeby ktos o ten dalszy ciag zapytal)
My favourite way of spending my free time is to create music on my computer.
I am an electronic music maker and I create calm, deep and mysterious
sounds, a kind of experimental music. I like to watch old movies.
I also read many books especially Science-Fiction. Philip K. Dick is my favourite writer because he is able to convey a superb atmosphere.
My biggest dream is to travel to Japan.

hmmo jaką prace ?? gdzie na tym forum jest post SPC International ...no to własnie tam na statki :)