prosze o sprawdzenie..

mam prośbe co do sprawdzenia niektórych zdań, które napisalam porownywując engineera i bussines women:)
his job demand having to be precise , he can't make mistakes, cauce his health hang on it.
(...)whereas bussines women doesn't need this requirements cause her job doesn't meet it.
pewnie wszystko źle, ale staralam się..:(

his job demands being precise, he can't make any mistakes because his health depends on it.
whereas bussines woman doesn't need to meet those requirements since her job isn't hazardous.
nie bylo tak zle ;))

His job demands precision kropka albo przynajmniej średnik, a nie przecinek.

there is SIN in business.

"whereas bussines women doesn't need this requirements cause her job doesn't meet it."

Czy piszesz o jednej business woman (l. poj), czy o wielu? (business women-l.mn)

a business womAn doesn't need this?? (czy these) requirement(s) BEcause her job doesn't meet???? (co to ma znaczyc?) it
business womEn don't need this?? (czy these) requirement(s)BEcause THEIR jobS...