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My hobby is sport, music and reading book. I like playing volleyball and football. My favourite sportswoman is Katarzyna Skowrońska. She is great. My secound hobby is music. My favourite kind of music is Pop and Hip-hop.My favourite singers is Rihanna , because has a great songs.My favourite gruppe is Feel.I often watch VIVA music programmes. My następne hobby is reading books. My favourite book is Krucjata w dżinsach.

My 'hobby is' (napisz HOBBIES ARE - bo wy6mieniasz wiecej jak jeno) sport, music and reading bookS (dlatego, ze wiecej jak jeden).
My 'secound' (ortog) hobby is music. My favourite 'kind of music is' (musisz to napisac w l. mn. kindS of music ARE) Pop and Hip-hop. My favourite 'singers' SINGER (w l. poj, bo tylko jedna wymieniles) is Rihanna , because has 'a' (nie, przed l. mn (songs) nie dajemy 'a') great songs. My favourite 'gruppe' (ortog) is Feel.
My 'następne' NEXT hobby is reading books.
...Krucjata w dżinsach' (a po ang...IN JEANS).

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