prosze o sprawdzenie pracy

Na spotkania z przyjaciółmi częstokroć umawiamy się w kawiarniach. Lubimy ładny wystrój ich wnętrz i unoszący sie zapach kawy. Opisz swoją ulubiona kawiarnię lub miejsce spotkań z przyjaciółmi.
The best place where me and rest of my friends spend time together is old cafe called 'A cup of coffee'. It is located near bus station, next to shop with souvenirs. The building was built about twenty years ago and firstly it was a small grocery shop. Then it was changed into cafe . It is not very big and it has got two big windows with view on one of the most crowded street called St.Jones and also there is a beautiful exhibition of artifiical fruit and vegetable. The walls outside building are green and there is hung a huge sign which shows a name of cafe. Inside there are six tables and four chairs for guests. Besides, in the left corner there is a coctail cabinet and customer can choose his favourite song from juke-box. You do not need to pay for using toilets although when you want to smoke cigarette you must go to a special room for smokers. The walls inside are red with gold stripes, there are also some pictures which present a nature. The floor is made from wood. Everywhere you can smell the wonderful smell of cake and coffee. The atmosphere is really good. There are no fights here because of security guards who look after guests. Moreover, the service is very hospitable. I believe it is a great and cosy place to spend your free time with your friends here. I strongly recommend it.

czy moglby mi ktos to sprawdzic bardzo a to bardzo prosze...

The best place where me and rest of my friends spend time together
is AN old cafe called 'A cup of coffee'. It is located near THE bus station,
next to 'shop with souvenirs' (mozna souvernir shop). The building was built about twenty years ago and 'firstly' AT FIRST it was a small grocery shop. Then it was changed into A cafe . It is not very big and it has got two big windows with view on one of the most crowded street called St.Jones.
There is a beautiful exhibition of artifiical fruit and vegetableS (ale gdzie?). The walls outside THE building are green and there is 'hung' (niepotr) a huge sign which shows 'a' THE name of THE cafe.
Inside there are six tables and four chairs for guests. (to wyglada, ze niema krzesel z tymi stolami-cos tu nie tak).
Besides, in the left corner there is a coctail cabinet and customerS
can choose 'his' THEIR favourite song from juke-box.
The walls inside are red with gold stripes, there are also some pictures which present 'a' (niepotr) nature.
There are no fights here because of THE security guards who look after THE guests.

thank u very much:)moglabys jeszcze looknac na to?bo postanowilam w ferie pisac 1 prace dziennie i tu wrzucac ale nie wiem czy mnie nie zbluzgaja ze caly czas prosze o pomoc;/
Uczymy się przez to co widzimy i słyszymy. A w jaki sposób wykorzystać inne zmysły by poszerzyć nasze horyzonty? Napisz opowiadanie, w którym główny bohater wykorzystuje zmysł węchu lub smaku, aby rozwiązać pewna zagadkę.
Long time ago in the highest mountains there was a mysterious animal which stole a food from local people. Villagers are thought it was a huge fox although nobody had exactly clue what was it. In the village located nearly the man called Thomas decided to face this challenge and found out what it was. I was short after when the animal had stolen all his food from basement. He lost almost everything. One day after supper he wanted to meet with this animal and he went to next his cave. He was standing about an hour but he saw only darkness. Next day he arrived to his cousin's house who also lost his food. He asked him 'What did you loose?' The cousin answered 'All jars of jam.And you?'. Thomas smiled and replied him 'Now we know what is the favourite thing for this creature to eat'. Both man decided to pepare a jam and they added a special liquid which had got a specific smell. They put in their basements and waited. After three hours they noticed some shadow. They were sure it was it. The animal stole jams and went away to cave. During it the mam were following him by smell from jars. They entered to cave and saw an old man who was eating their food. The enigma was solved and the mystrious animal turned out to be an ordinary robber.

Forum jest po to by pomagac innym. Jak sam bedziesz pisal (nie uzywajac translatorow) to zawsze sprawdzimy i poprawimy.

Long time ago in the highest mountains there was a mysterious
animal which stole 'a' (niepotr) food from local people. Villagers 'are' (niepotr) thought it was a huge fox, although nobody had 'exactly clue what was it' (a clue exactly what it was).
In the village located 'nearly' NEARBY THERE WAS A 'the' (niepotr) man called Thomas WHO decided to face this challenge and 'found' FIND out what it was. IT was short after THE TIME when the animal had stolen all his food from HIS basement.
One day after supper he wanted to meet with this animal and he went 'to
next' NEXT TO his cave. He was standing FOR about an hour, but he saw only darkness.
He asked him 'What did you LOSE?' The cousin answered 'All jars of
jam. And you?'. Thomas smiled and replied 'him' (niepotr) 'Now we know what is the favourite thing 'for' (tutaj mozna...thing that the creature likes to eat) this creature to eat'. Both 'man' MEN decided to pRepare 'a' SOME jam and they added a special liquid which had got a specific smell.
They put IT in their basements and waited. After three hours they noticed
'some' A shadow. They were sure THAT 'it' THIS was it. The animal stole THE 'jams' JAM and went away to THE cave. During 'it' THIS TIME the 'mam' MEN (l. mnpga) were following him by THE smell from THE jars.
They entered 'to' THE cave and saw an old man who was eating their food. The
enigma was solved and the 'mystrious' MYSTERIOUS animal turned out to be an
ordinary robber.

PISALA:)jestem dziewczyna...tak wiem ze translatory sa do bani wole pisac z bledami i poprosic o pomoc niz ich uzywac...