terri prosze o sprawdzenie pracy

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Napisalam swoj tok myslenia moze bedzie ci latwiej to spr i mi pomoc bede bardzo wdzieczna jesli mi pomozesz.
Napisz rozprawke na temat:"Teenagers taking up sport profesionally-pros and cons".
The world of fame and sport more often create an opportunity for young people to enable them to get on higher level in life. Most of them face this challenge and for instance take up sport profesionally. What are the(czyli wiem czego wady i zalety czy wogole bez the?) disadvantages and advantages of this phenomenon?
First of all, the(okreslona grupa ludzi mlodych tak jak np the rich-bogaci) young people achieve a (przed przymiotnikiem i pozniej rzeczownik) great chance to develop their skills under intent eyes of better coach. Secondly, they are able to do what they love and earn a lot of money matching a pleasure with useful(tutaj mialo byc laczyc przyjemne z pozytecznym ale chyba zle jest sformulowane bo sama pisalam). Furthermore, an(tutaj nie wiem o kim pisze wiec AN) young sportsman can make a (przed rzecz.) carieer and become famous in short time.
On the other hand, the(wiem o jaka slawe chodzi i bogactwo) fame and wealth can hit to young person's head like a (przym + rzecz) soda water in old well known proverb. Besides, such persons(myslalam zeby dac persons like these) have to grow up faster than their peers. Their childhood is shorter and they do not have time to go out with friends instead of it they work hard training everyday. Another disadvantage is that young sportsman's education can suffer from(ale tez sie zastanawialam czy nie suffer because of?) freqent meetings and sport competitions.
Taking all facts into consideration, I can state that there are as many positive as negative aspects of being a(przym+rzecz.) young sportsman. I believe we should consider all of them before we make a(rzecz.) decision and then choose the better way for us.
The world of fame 'and' (moze lepiej IN) sport more often createS an opportunity for young people to enable them to get onTO A higher 'level' (moze lepiej 'position') in life. What are the disadvantages and advantages of this phenomenon? (to zdanie jest ok)
First of all, 'the'(A group of young people for example the rich) CAN/MAY achieve a great chance to develop their skills under THE 'intent' (napisz 'watchful') eyes of A better coach. Secondly, they are able to do what they love and earn a lot of money 'matching' (lepsze slowo to 'combining') 'a' (niepotr) 'pleasure with useful' (nie, zwykle mowimy ...combining work and pleasure). Furthermore, 'an' A young sportsman can 'make' HAVE (you have a career) a 'carieer' CAREER and become famous in A (very) short time.
On the other hand, 'the' (niepotr) fame and wealth can hit 'to' A young person's head like a 'soda water' (ale ang. to nic nie mowi - ) in AN old well known Polish proverb. Besides, such persons have to grow up faster than their peers. Their childhood is shorter and they do not have time to go out with friends instead of 'it' WHICH they work hard training everyday. Another disadvantage is that young sportsman's education can suffer 'from' (tutaj because of) freqent meetings and sport competitions.
Taking all THE facts into consideration,...(reszta ok)
...
Ostatnio slyszalam cos fajnego, moze kiedys uzyjesz 'He who has never been a child, can never be an adult'.
dzieki wielkie:)
First of all, 'the'(A group of young people for example the rich)
tutaj jak to napisalam to nie chcialam tego przetlumaczyc tylko ze gosciu od ang nam tlumaczyl ze grupa ludzi o okresonej cesze w tym wypadku mlodzi to stosujemy przed tym THE,to dobrze czy nie?
First of all, a group of ....
First of all, the group of...
masz racje, ze tutaj moze byc 'the', bo chodzi o specificzna grupe, ja myslalam wiecej ogolnie..(wymieniajac jedna z wielu takich 'grup' - wtedy a)
acha juz rozumiem dzieki jeszcze raz

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