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How do people become addicted? What can be done to help fight addctions?
Addiction is the most dangerous thing in the human's life. No matter a person is addicted to cigarettes or alcohol. It destroys health, relations in family and it is a waste of money. How do people become addicted?
Well, there are many reasons why people try to new things such as alcohol or drugs. Firstly, they are looking for something which can allow them to forget about their sorrows or problems. Secondly, it may be caused by surrounding for example some people smoke for company and they do not realize that such behaviour may also bring into addiction. They think:'One cigarette doesn't kill anyone'. It's a wrong way of thinking because later our organism need substances from cigarette to function properly. Thirdly, some of people follow new trends. In the beggining of XXI century smoking was very popular. It was said to be a feature of new lifestyle. Nowadays it is not so acceptable like in the past. Smokers more often live on society margin.
Community try to fight addcitions by creating new centres of help for addicted people. Besides, in mass media we can notice plenty of announcements and leaflets which showed us effects of addcitions or trying to prevent us against them. What is more, in drugstore we can find some useful medicines which help us to give up bad habits.
Doubtless, people in such situations have to have a family support but what is essential they have to understand that they are addicted and express their will to face it.
Addiction is the most dangerous thing in the human's life. (nie zgodze sie z tym, - the most dangerous thing is 'love')
(tu brakuje poczatku zdania) No matter IF a person is addicted to cigarettes or TO alcohol. It destroys health, relations in family and 'it is a waste of money' (nie, nie tak, nikt kto pali nie powie, ze tak jest).
'Well' (juz o tym 'well' pisalam, to nie w formie pisemnej, to nie jest potrzebne, nie opowiadasz tego swojej kolezance, piszesz powazny tekst)
There are many reasons why people try 'to' (niepotr) new things such as
alcohol or drugs.
Secondly, 'it' (do czego to sie odnosi?) may be caused by THEIR surrounding for example some people smoke for company and they do not realize that such behaviour may also bring (cos- cos tu brakuje) into addiction.
It's a wrong way of thinking because later ON our organism needS substances from cigarette to function properly.
In the 'beggining' (ortog) of THE XXI century smoking was very popular. It was said to be a feature of A new lifestyle. Nowadays it is not so acceptable 'like' (nie uzywaj mi tego 'like' bo zwariuje - tutaj AS) in the
past. Smokers more often THAN NOT live on society's marginS.
THE community trIES to fight 'addcitions' (ortog) by creating new centres of help for addicted people. Besides, in mass media we can notice plenty of
announcements and leaflets which show us THE effects of 'addcitions' (ortog) or
WHICH trY to prevent us FROM ADDIUCTIONS. 'against them' (niepotr). What is more, in 'drugstore' A CHEMIST we can find some useful medicines which help us to give up bad habits.
Doubtless, people in such situations have to have 'a' (niepotr) family support but what is essential IS THAT they have to understand that they are addicted and express their will to face it.

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