Proszę o profesjonalną ocenę maturalną zadania pisemnego błędy , na ile punktów ?? max 10p

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odpowiedź :
Welcome Dear Mr. johnson
I am writing to enquire about your IT courses which caught my eye .
I saw an advert for your computing courses in my local paper therefore i want to sign up for the IT course because i would like to learn desing the gardens on the special websites and aplications and create my own website with a blog about gardening in order to develop my Garden company .


I have a quite good background in IT skills such as i graduated the exel and photoshop course , though i have still a lot of problems in the field of properly operate a computer and create a website that is such huge problem for me . i have been using a computer for 10 years and i need some help .

I would like to ask if you would send me some detailed information about the courses you offer such as fee and lessons schedule ? especially for my needs!
i wonder if you could recommend a course for people with my skills and am i a good candidate for the course ?

i have got a hope that you will can help me with it and i want to rely upon you.
i would say that if you can help me i will succeed in my company and i will have more knowlage about in the field of IT .
i would be grateful if you would let me know as soon as possible.
i look forward to hearing from you soon .

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