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Dear karol
Thank you so much for the an<-USUN MP3 player that you sent me for my birthday.The MP3 player,which you bought for me,is ideal USUN OBA PRZECINKI.
Uploader W TYM ZDANIU BRAKUJE PODMIOTU I ORZECZENIA W CZASIE PRESENT PERFECT, BO UPLOADER TO RZECZOWNIKsongs on it already.The sound is very good.I use it when I go in the morning<TE TRZY SLOWA DAJ NA KONIEC ZDANIA to school by bus.
FOR this birthday I got some really great gifts.My parents gave me some money..I bought a<-NA PEWNO NIE JEDNEGO BUTA new schoes<-BLAD ORTOGRAFICZNY,and my sister bought me a new t-shirt.Gregor gave me THE computer GAME "Bad Company 2".I haven't played it yet.I spent my birthday with my family and we have<MA BYC CZAS PRZESZLY a small party at home.
I really am very gratefyl<BLUND ORTOFRAFICZNY to you for this gift.Thanks again for PRZEDIMEK MP3 player.
Best wishes.
Adrian

The MP3 player,which you bought for me,is ideal USUN OBA PRZECINKI.
A nie:
The MP3 player,THAT you bought for me,is ideal USUN OBA PRZECINKI./?/
Albo bez WHICH or THAT?

Dear Arek,

Thank you so much for the money that you sent me for my birthday. I bought a new wallet. It was<MUSI BYC NOWE ZDANIE? in the supermarket . It's black and soft . very well=BARDZO DOBRZE - O CO CI CHODZILO?. The wallet is trendy . For THE rest of the money I went to the swimming pool with Patryk.
I spent my birthday with my close family and I have nice memories. We ate cake and we have TY CZYTALES MOJE POPRAWKI DO POPRZEDNIEGO? a small party at home. My parents gave me an watch gold<-WATCH NA KONCU I UWAZAJ, NIE 'AN'. I waited for this all my holidays. Patryk gave me the<-JEDYNA NA SWIECIE? new computer game and ball to the last person<-TEGO NIE ROZUMIEM.

Best wishes.