Proszę o sprawdzenie.

Proszę o sprawdzenie tych zdań:

1. He supervises activity of the firm. He is responsible for creating and controlling the firm’s strategy. He creates vision and mission of the firm.
2. He is responsible for prepares payrolls and conducts records of employees. He also makes tax declarations of employees.
3. He supervises the current activity of finance department. He prepares and realizes financial policy of firm. He gives informations to the Chief Executive about financial condition of firm.
4. He is responsible for designs a new products and also he designs an advertising campaigns. He conducts marketing research.
5. He is responsible for calculations of demand on components to production. He is responsible for draws up orders.
6. He is responsible for prepares prognosis and analysis. He creates motivation systems for employees. One of his targets is reinforcing position of the firm on the market.
7. He is responsible for the current bookkeeping. He prepares raports and reports. He is responsible for realizing payments.
8. Secretary helps in the troublesome office activities. For example: maintaining files, operating telephones, typing letters and other clerical functions

1. He supervises THE activity (tutaj l. mn) of the firm. He is responsible for creating and controlling the firm’s strategy. He creates THE vision and THE (zaraz mi sie znudzy wklejac te przedimki co drugie slowo) mission of the firm.
2. He is responsible for THE 'prepares' (zla czesc mowy) payrolls and 'conducts' (zle slowo) (ale jakie?) records of (przedimek) employees. He also 'makes' (poszukaj lepsze slowo) tax declarations of (przedimek) employees.
3. He supervises the current activity of (przedimek) finance department. He prepares and realizes *(przedimek) financial policy of (PRZEDIMEK) firm. He 'gives' (poszukaj lepsze slowo np relates)'informations' (tutaj niepol. infiormation) to the Chief Executive about financial condition of firm.
4. He is responsible for 'designs' (przedimek) DESIGNING 'a' (a to niby po co, jak masz l. mn) new products and also he designs 'an' (niepotr) (dlaczego wszyscy macie takie az problemy z tymi przedimkami???) advertising campaigns. He conducts 'marketing' MARKET research.
5. He is responsible for (przedimek) calculations 'of demand on components' (nie za bardzo trafne) to production. He is responsible for 'draws' DRAWING (ale to nie za bardzo dobre slowo) up orders.
6. He is responsible for (prezedimek) ' prepares' (zla czesc mowy) (brakuje cos) prognosis and analysis. He 'creates' (napisz dokladnie co masz na mysli to wyglada dziwniwe) and motivation systems for employees. One of his targets is reinforcing (przedimek) position of the firm 'on' IN the market.
7. He is responsible for 'the current bookkeeping' (poszukaj odpowiednie okreslenie nie takie jak masz). He prepares 'raports and reports' (a niby jaka jest tutaj roznica - jedno slowo jest po polsku a drugie po ang - co to?). He is responsible for realizing payments.
8. (przedimek) Secretary 'helps' Assists) in the 'troublesome office activities' (calkowicie zlwe okreslenie). For example: maintaining files, operating telephones, typing letters and other clerical functions
Naucz sie przedimkow i kurcze blade nie zaczynaj kazdego zdania z 'he.....