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Witam ,musiałem napisac tekst na angielski o swoim idolu,bardzo prosze o sprawdzenie treści i dokonanie ewentualnych korekt :
A person I admire

A person I admire is Robert Mączyński . His stage name is Robert M. He's from Poland,and he lives in Kraków. He work as music producer and creates club music.He's won many awards,cause his songs (Dance Hall Track,Super Bomb,All day all night) are very good.
He is 28 years old. He is slim and tall. He always good looking. He usually wears colorful t-shirts ,jeans,cap, and many,many accessories . In the picture ,he’s wearing blue
jeans and t-shirt. He also like wear expensive shoes.
He is very popular,honest and friendly. He ‘s got a lot of fans in the country. People like him,because He integrates with them . He also writes about his experiences at Website (www.facebook.com/RobertM) . He isn’t lazy,unfriendly and dishonest. He also gives money for charity.
The reason I admire him is because I like his music ,and his nature. In future , I want to be like him.

Dzień dobry,napisałam taką pracę dotyczącą opisu sytuacji,Proszę o sprawdzenie tego,będę bardzo wdzięczna:
This accident happened on Saturday at nine o'clock.It happened near police station.
Suddenly,driver didn't stop his car.He lost control of the car and fell into the hole.I think it could happen to anyone.
The people,wchich had seen this accident,quickly phoned for an ambulance and police.They got out his car with him.Fortunelly,the driver was safe and healthy.People ran to his,but he didn't talk with their.The police's oficers protected ground.They didn't want to people were here.Peple think that the driver to asleep or was under the influence of alcohol.They weren't right.Investigation revealed that somebody damaged brokes.

A person I admire
He workS (he to 3 os.l.poj) as (przedimek) music producer and creates club music.He's won many awards,'cause' (prosze pisac w calosci, bo tu nie widze zadnego 'effect') his songs (Dance Hall Track,Super Bomb,All day all night) are very good.
He always 'good looking' (nie, bo ty masz na mysli 'looks good').
In the picture ,he’s wearing blue jeans and A t-shirt. He also likeS (przerob te 3os.l.poj jeszcze raz) TO wear expensive shoes.
People like him (nie poitr przecinka) because 'He' (mala litera) intergrates with them.

This accident happened on (przedimek) Saturday at nine o'clock. It happened near (przedimek) police station.
Suddenly, (przedimek) driver didn't stop his car. He lost control of the car and fell into 'the' (tutaj A) hole.
The people,'wchich' (ortog ale jak piszemy o ludziach to mowimy WHO) had seen this accident,quickly phoned for an ambulance and (przedimek) police.They got 'out his car with him' (tutaj sie pomieszalas, ma byc ...got him out of his car). 'Fortunelly' (ortog) ,the driver was safe and healthy.People ran to 'his' (nie, tutaj HIM) ,but he didn't talk with 'their' THEM (poczytaj o tym jeszcze bo sie mylisz).The police's oficers protected (przedimek) ground.They didn't want 'to' (niepotr) people TO BE 'were' (niepotr) here. 'Peple' (ortog) think that the driver 'to' WAS asleep or was under the influence of alcohol.They 'weren't' (napisz to w calosci) right. (przedimek) Investigation revealed that somebody HAD damaged (przedimek) 'brokes' (slowo to BRAKES).

Nagle, /kierowca czegos nie zrobil/. Czy rzeczywiscie jest to poprawnie?

'Suddenly' (nie jest potrzebne), The driver didn't stop his car.
i tez 'hole' powinno byc 'ditch',