Krótki tekst - Somebody watching me - CCTV

Bardzo proszę o sprawdzenie i poprawienie błędów w tekście:
CCTV – violates our rights your privacy.
Nobody has a right to privacy in public places, and the only people who should fear these new initiatives are those who plan to do wrong. In fact, if you 're a law-abiding citizen, CCTV can ensure you 're not falsely accused of a crime. CCTV Doing this is to prevent terrorism. CCTV cameras are in every place in the larger cities, like London. The average London resident (citizen) is recorder 300 times a day. Cameras monitors every your step. CCTV is permissible in public areas including shopping malls, motorways and housing estates. CCTV cameras have become more advanced in recent years and it can now isolate and track identified targets, recognise number-plates, and eavesdrop on conversations. People feel that their privacy is violated, but this is the price we pay for security at any place and any time.
CCTV cameras are very useful and help people. Firstly – help catch criminals. Secondly – use the CCTV cameras can resolved criminal cases. First of all CCTV cameras are useful in road traffic as well in shops help to catch thieves. Witch CCTV cameras people can feel safe. That sums up the cameras help people at work e.g. security guards, police and bodyguards.

Potrzebuję tego na już, wieć bardzo proszę o poprawienie błędów.

Nobody has a right to privacy in public places, and the only people who should fear these new initiatives are those who plan to do SOMETHING wrong.
'CCTV' (nie rozumiem co to tutaj robi) Doing 'this' (ale co? cos nie tak z tym zdaniem) is to prevent terrorism. CCTV cameras are in 'every place' (nie, to jest bardzo mylne, bo to nie przekazuje tego co chcesz powiedziec) in the larger cities, like London. The average London resident is 'recorder' (popraw to slowo) 300 times a day. 'Cameras monitors' (prosze dostosowac rzecz do czasownika, albo l. poj albo l. mn) every your step.
CCTV cameras have become more advanced in recent years and 'it' (ale jak mowisz o cameraS to jest l. mnoga, nie mozesz uzywac 'it') can now isolate and track identified targets, recognise
number-plates, and eavesdrop on conversations.
Firstly – THEY help catch criminals. Secondly – THE 'use' USAGE OF 'the' (nieptor) CCTV cameras can 'resolved' (tutaj czas terazn.) criminal cases. First of all CCTV cameras are useful in road traffic as well AS in shops (tu brakuje pare slow) help to catch thieves. 'Witch' (zle slowo- witch to czarownica, ale popraw cale zdanie) CCTV cameras people can feel safe. 'That sums up' SUMMING UP the cameras helpS (prosze pamietac o l. poj i l. mn-) people at work e.g. security guards, police and bodyguards.