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„American Life” is a great book about America and Americans. It was written by Vicky Shipton. When I read this book I felt like I was in the fourth biggest country in the word, I was in the United State of America. I travelled and sightseeing, I told with people I got to know the traditions and habits . This book showed me American life what I didn’t know. Americans loves sports: baseball, American football, hockey and basketball are the biggest. United States have many problems for examp: some people are thinking that in the future there’ll be “two countries”-one for rich people and one for poor people, but the biggest problem in the US are guns everybody can buy a weapon easily in the most states. Halloween on the 31st October’s a American Day. Children dress in funny clothes ask neighbours for candy. This’s very interesting book. I’ll be travelling that when I be adult.

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„American Life” is a great book about America and Americans. It has been written by Vicky Shipton. When I read this book I felt like I was in the fourth largest country in the word, or in the United States of America. I travelled and sightseeing, I talk with people and I got to know the traditions and habits . This book showed me American life that I hadn’t known before. Americans love sports: baseball, American football, hockey and basketball are the most popular. The United States of America has many problems, for example: some people think that in the future there’ll be “two countries”-the first one for rich people and the second one for poor people, but the biggest problem in the US are guns that everybody can easily buy in the most states. Halloween on the 31st October is American Day. The Children dress in the funny clothes and they ask neighbours for candy. This’s a very interesting book. (Ostatnie zdanie dziwnie brzmi wg mnie)

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„American Life” is a 'great' (wg Ciebie?) book about America and (brak przedimka) Americans. 'It has been' (mozna to opuscic i kontin zdanie) written by Vicky Shipton. When I read this book I felt 'like'# (nie 'like' tylko AS IF) I was in the fourth largest country in the 'word' (zle slowo - popraw), or in the United States of America. I travelled and (went) sightseing, I 'talk' (zle tutaj czas przeszly) with people and I got to know the traditions and habits (ale kogo? czego?) . This book showed me (brak przedimka) American life that I hadn’t known before.
The United States of America has many problems, for example: some people think that in the future there’ll be “two countries”-'the first' (niepotr) one for rich people and the second one for poor people, but the biggest problem in the US are guns that everybody can easily buy in 'the' (niepotr) most states. Halloween on the 31st October is (brak przedimka) American Day. The children dress in 'the' (niepotr) funny clothes and they ask (cos tu brakuje- 'their?) neighbours for candy. 'This’s' (popraw - napisz to normalnie) a very interesting book.

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