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The person what I am going to describe is called Eminem. I first heard of him when I watched TV in 2000. Eminem was born in 1972 in Detroit,i n the USA. He is an American pale-skinned rapper, rekord producer and actor.
Eminem is tallish man in the mid thirties. He has got round face with snub-nose and small expressie blue eyes. He prefers wearing confortable clothes, such as long and loose T-shirts and trousers. Usually wears funny caps back to front. When he is on stage wears some jewelry, such as long nacklaces and earnings.
Eminem is a person whose I admire. The street was his home. He lived among dangerous people but he didn’t become like they. He is not only ambitious but also hard-working. The proof about that are his prices. However, he tends to be very helpfully, he has produced and appeared on several songs by others famous rappers, such as Jay-Z’s and 50 Cent’s.
Being lovely father he wrote many songs for his daughter ,Hailie. I see him as a very creative person. He has written beautiful lyrics.
Eminem gained popularity In 1999 with his debut album „The Slim Shady”, which won a Grammy Awards for Best Rap Album. However, he played In his semi-autobiographical film „8 Mile”. To sum up He won 11 Grammys and an Oscar.
What I like most about his that He show that If you work really very hard you can accomplish a lot. For all these reasons, I really like him.

The person what I am going to describe is called Eminem. I first heard of him in 2000 when I was watching TV in 2000. Eminem was born in 1972 in Detroit in the USA. He is an American white-skinned rapper, music producer and actor.
Eminem is a tall man in the mid-thirties. He has got a round face with a snub nose and small expressive blue eyes. He prefers wearing comfortable clothes, such as long and loose T-shirts and trousers.

The person 'what' (to jest kalka z polskiego - popraw, czy o ludziach mowisz jak o rzeczach?) I am going to describe is called Eminem.
He is an American pale-skinned rapper, 'rekord' (ortog) producer and actor.
Eminem is tallish man in 'the' (niepotr) mid thirties. He has got (brak przedimka) round face with (brak przedimka) snub-nose and small 'expressie' (ortog) blue eyes. He prefers wearing 'confortable' (ortog) clothes, such as long and loose T-shirts and trousers. (ale kto? co?) musisz napisac) usually wears funny caps back to front. When he is on stage (kto? co?) wears some 'jewelry' (ortog), such as long nacklaces and earnings.
Eminem is a person 'whose' (zle slowo) I admire.
He lived among dangerous people (przecinek przed 'but' zawsze!) but he didn’t become like 'they' (zle slowo, tutaj THEM-poczytaj o roznicy).
The proof about that are his 'prices' (jego ceny? o jakich cenach piszesz? co on sprzedaje?) . However, he tends to be very 'helpfully' (zla czesc mowy), he has produced and appeared 'on' IN several songs by others famous rappers, such as Jay-Z’s and 50 Cent’s.
Being (a gdzie przedimek?) lovely father he wrote many songs for his daughter ,Hailie.
'However' (to jest zle slowo tutaj-), he played (ale kogo? siebie? trzeba napisac) in his semi-autobiographical film „8 Mile”.
What I like most about 'his' (zle slowo, tutaj HIM) IS that He 'show' (ale przeciez 'he' to jest 3os.l.poj dostosuj czasownik) that if you work really very hard you can accomplish a lot.

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